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Syck Vs. Flow2Crazy
A'ight...here are tha rules...
House rules (No D/R, Hate, Crew Votes) 10 Lines MAX Whoever spits first. Check in. A'ight, lets go... |
yo dis is my check in dun, u spit first and ill spit rite afta u
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imma spit fo dis no show cuz i been waitin fo a while n dis nigga still aint here
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Been busy...you coulda spit you lil' bitch...now Ima rip you to shreds...
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A'yo...check this shit... Spittin' 'flows' like 'crazy' cause I'm '2' hot 'bove tha colla You a broke bitch, look he's in tha hole forty four dollaz (rapperz guy) Rip you...tear you...my presence begins to scare you Battlin' a weak fuck...? Haha, why did I even care to? You got Ill Statements? Maybe about health care You so broke, if you was tha President you still be on welfare Bitch you shoulda stopped actin' ran for govenor like Schwartzy If you fuckin' 'Mini-Me' is tha only way you gettin' a shorty Back down, clown, give up because you couldn' be an infection Only way you flow too crazy is movin' in traffic goin tha otha direction Ripped. Merk'd. And it was half-assed. |
This boy syck is a waste of space, his shit is wack n he is a disgrace,
To all the rappers in this place, this boys rite he is sick, Sick in the head thinkin he can kick, rhmyes that sound slick, Shoulda stayed anotha no show, i know ur terrified of my flow, That melts mc's like snow, Ur syck cuz u got pnuemonia, Not from ur flow that stinks like ammonia, I got shorties like Sonya n Tonya, Im the leader of the game, im constantly makin u look lame, All of ur words sound the same, U make less sense than a change machine, Ur destruction was easily forseen, cuz ur rhymes were too routine... That was too easy dun |
Uppin'.
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uppin for some votes
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uppin again but we neva gon get any votes
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uppin AGAIN come on dont sleep on this....
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Syck more punches although, Flow had a good finish
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come check mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137399
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Syck:Spittin' 'flows' like 'crazy' cause I'm '2' hot 'bove tha colla
You a broke bitch, look he's in tha hole forty four dollaz (rapperz guy) (aiight opener) Rip you...tear you...my presence begins to scare you Battlin' a weak fuck...? Haha, why did I even care to? (ok...basic.....but ok) You got Ill Statements? Maybe about health care You so broke, if you was tha President you still be on welfare (whack....Ill Statements about health care...sounds like u wanted 2 rhyme so bad with da punch n da next line u put anyhing) Bitch you shoulda stopped actin' ran for govenor like Schwartzy If you fuckin' 'Mini-Me' is tha only way you gettin' a shorty ( top line could of been a whole lot betta...da mini me is ur best line yet) Back down, clown, give up because you couldn' be an infection Only way you flow too crazy is movin' in traffic goin tha otha direction (ok closer....nice last line...good punch) F2C:This boy syck is a waste of space, his shit is wack n he is a disgrace, To all the rappers in this place, this boys rite he is sick, (u gotta b kiddin me......*lost for words*) Sick in the head thinkin he can kick, rhmyes that sound slick, Shoulda stayed anotha no show, i know ur terrified of my flow (flow2basic should b ur name.....) That melts mc's like snow, Ur syck cuz u got pnuemonia, Not from ur flow that stinks like ammonia, I got shorties like Sonya n Tonya, (I see u thrown punches but u hittin all air) Im the leader of the game, im constantly makin u look lame, All of ur words sound the same, U make less sense than a change machine, (think longer on punches) Ur destruction was easily forseen, cuz ur rhymes were too routine... ( actually.....u was too routine) Overall: Syck:Some nice punches. Ok wordplay. no meta's. Try to get more personal and make da diss more direct.Dont rush ur rhymes....take ur time. F2C:Stretched lines, no good structure, and an off flow. Punches were weak, try usin more personals different words. Ur verse was too predictable and rhyme scheme 2 simple. v/Syck check me out....http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137344 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137900 |
i give it 2 SYCK flow2crazy's
flow fell off at da end in he didn't have n e metaphors dat hit hard like SYCK his were kinda wack v/SYCK vote on my battles DRAG~ON vs killah http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138650 phatinum http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 ice pick http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138867 intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139173 don http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290 1 |
ok flow your flow is horrible your personals were weak as fuck and your punches wouldve been good if you worded them better but you didint and that killed you.sick you didnt do much better but your flow was good great compared to flows shit your punches were ok as was your opener and closer so with a better verse you win.
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