My Mixtext Verse.
 

could U please tell me wat U think.

Rappers becomes figments of emagination when I concentrate/
Battle all new comers and vets and set goals to dominate/
Illest thoughts ever processed and leaked on text/
fitness wit a superior type of braintwisting complex/
My verbal inpacts leave no loved once intact, and Im open for diss-cussions/
my love forgive my talented soul thats frozen the brains into state of concusion/
Verbally fit to rip the ozone wit my venomuse spit like methain gas/
I walks through raging croweds while niggaz silence up, saying let the veteren pass/
representing my darkess passion for freestyle rapping and ripping heads off/
Put 2 and 2 together and slaped out Ur mouth all the rymes U fed off/
My dick only has a one way tickets, so I advice U to get off/
my rymes r like toilets, concentrated to let the shit drop/
I gets hot, when my temper is tested like animals for facial products/
Im latino whatchin racial fuck ups, challenge the society inspite of threats/
If U murder half the alphabet, I'll still be the only real MC left/
I'll have Ur Docter pulling punchlines out Of ur chest/
my slang connects quicker than DSL High speed/
make Ur face leak the blood like duracell in high heat/
over a thousand bars of knowlegde, passed down like tribes/
I spit on this website, to let my followers know tha hip hop is still alive/


Let me know wat U think about it. Use the poll too pleaze.

good job liked that alot, maybe we could do a colab soon but that was good i give it a 8

thanks, lets get some more feed back. life is good when U lyrical.

hay, anybody else wanna give me some feed back on this shit.? just a few words would be good. thanx again to mJust.

good job yo.

yo,any body wanna do a colab

nice drop man, you had a nice flow and some good vocab, i liked the open for diss-cusions line and the one way ticket line.....ya verse was good.......keep it up.......

thanx for that, could U guyz also hit up my poll just so I could kno wat I need in my rymes. thanx for all the feed back even tho this was from a while back.

tight work. If u guys like this verse then could U also hit me wit some feed back on my audio link in my sig. thnx.