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10 - 10 Yes, it was that ill. | 2 | 66.67% | |
08 - 10 It was tight but U should work on it. | 1 | 33.33% | |
06 - 10 It wasnt dat good but it was ok. | 0 | 0% | |
04 - 10 It was stupid | 0 | 0% | |
02 and below. it was wak. | 0 | 0% | |
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07-19-04, 01:38 AM | #1 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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My Mixtext Verse.
IP: 3240 794D
could U please tell me wat U think.
Rappers becomes figments of emagination when I concentrate/ Battle all new comers and vets and set goals to dominate/ Illest thoughts ever processed and leaked on text/ fitness wit a superior type of braintwisting complex/ My verbal inpacts leave no loved once intact, and Im open for diss-cussions/ my love forgive my talented soul thats frozen the brains into state of concusion/ Verbally fit to rip the ozone wit my venomuse spit like methain gas/ I walks through raging croweds while niggaz silence up, saying let the veteren pass/ representing my darkess passion for freestyle rapping and ripping heads off/ Put 2 and 2 together and slaped out Ur mouth all the rymes U fed off/ My dick only has a one way tickets, so I advice U to get off/ my rymes r like toilets, concentrated to let the shit drop/ I gets hot, when my temper is tested like animals for facial products/ Im latino whatchin racial fuck ups, challenge the society inspite of threats/ If U murder half the alphabet, I'll still be the only real MC left/ I'll have Ur Docter pulling punchlines out Of ur chest/ my slang connects quicker than DSL High speed/ make Ur face leak the blood like duracell in high heat/ over a thousand bars of knowlegde, passed down like tribes/ I spit on this website, to let my followers know tha hip hop is still alive/ Let me know wat U think about it. Use the poll too pleaze. |
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07-19-04, 05:43 PM | #2 | ||||
Banned!
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IP: C1DA C961
good job liked that alot, maybe we could do a colab soon but that was good i give it a 8
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07-20-04, 02:11 PM | #3 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: C1DA C961
thanks, lets get some more feed back. life is good when U lyrical.
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07-22-04, 11:38 PM | #4 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 4289 77F4
hay, anybody else wanna give me some feed back on this shit.? just a few words would be good. thanx again to mJust.
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07-23-04, 12:31 AM | #5 | |||||
New to RB
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IP: EB47 4B6A
good job yo.
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07-23-04, 01:32 AM | #6 | ||||
Banned!
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IP: 3240 794D
yo,any body wanna do a colab
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07-23-04, 01:33 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 23CC 11AC
This was an ill piece nice flow and vocab ... keep it up
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07-23-04, 02:32 AM | #8 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
nice drop man, you had a nice flow and some good vocab, i liked the open for diss-cusions line and the one way ticket line.....ya verse was good.......keep it up.......
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07-23-04, 03:01 AM | #9 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 4289 77F4
thanx for that, could U guyz also hit up my poll just so I could kno wat I need in my rymes. thanx for all the feed back even tho this was from a while back.
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07-29-04, 12:55 PM | #10 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 7681 72B2
tight work. If u guys like this verse then could U also hit me wit some feed back on my audio link in my sig. thnx.
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