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$-YoUnG-ThUg-$ Vs Sinner
usual house rules
7 - 10 lines |
checking in spit when your ready..................
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youngthung just wait and hold ya tongue//
i'ma kill you for fun and have ur little head spun// young thung just give up your such a smug// I mean a fag i'll kill you wid dis bar wid luck// your nothing you say you've bin here 4 days// I saw you in mayday u have deformed arms// your braincells are the size of pubic hairs// he also thinks he in the 60s wearin flares// this guy thinks he's a cheater im the believer// i'm a canabal.... i'll fuckin kill you and eat yer// you think your ill because you take the pill// haha :thefinger i'll rip you up and just wach your blood spill// |
Look at the avatar thinkin Sinner's "bling bling",
mo like he got mo diseases than the whole of beijing (capital of china) Dam this noob is fake he's just beatin his lips really u shine as much as a solar eclipse Time fo this kid ta put down the mic..step of the podium (stage) he couldnt even flow if he ate a box fulla immodium (diarea tablets) washed it down wit mah style n am a still burn him like sodium |
aight it says 7 - 10 lines i spitt 7 u spitt 12 where the fuck did 12 cum in ? any ways am a let u off
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sorry just got carried away... but nice spit......
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uppin this battle, u shud leave a link when u vote on this shyt
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ok both good struture and flow but thug you got kinda off track on the last bar.sinner your getting better but you need to work more on metaphores cuz your disses and punches seriosly lack.thug had some strong punches even though his verse was shorter(its not how much you say its what you say)his vocab was also way better
v/thug |
elevate...both of ya'll, this is garbage...go practice and quit wit the nursery rhymes...ya'll rhyming was wack, and all that, but since i came into this battle imma have to give it up to young thug because he dint put me to sleep, and his structure was better
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Same thag for me Vote Thug Return da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140116 |
sinner u are elevatin on voted on ur otha battle dis was a lot hotta/ thug ur shit was ill nasty punchlines/ same 4 u sinner/ it is pretty close battle/ u fucked sinner wen u talked bout deformed arms and pubic hairs shouldve left that out over all i got 2 give it 2 u sinner keep elevatin good jobs both return the favor peace
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140202 |
sinner ya verse was not very good
young ya verse was decent breakdown struc young flow young, much easier to read punches young.......look truthfully young toook this with less lyrics no hate we all need to elevate |
Well i give this one to sinner automatically because this dude cheated.. but he also had better stucture and punches so i vote for sinner..
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