requiem to the hood
 

life span shortened, same sad story//
another black man didn't make it to see forty//
shit startin to bore me, how can this be possible//
lived in fear to long, guns no longer an obstacle//
layin in hospitals, doctors livin profitable//
hand u a bill, damn! now u gotta robb sumone//
cop a gun, tables turned, sumbody gonna bleed//
why he had to fight back? he got mouths to feed//
our mantality is greed, survival of the fittest//
cops found the gat, now u got a life sentence//
u finished, now there's two fams wit no man//
two single moms makin it anyway they can//
wit food stamps and EBC on welfare//
on healthcare, get money from elsewhere//
no help here, two jobs plus prostitution//
five dollar head game, body filled wit pollution//
there's no solution, her son pop his vein shooting//
product of his enviroment, popped his brain shooting//
crooked cops blue suited, moms couldn't have a funeral//
cremated and memorial, wateva is affordable//

wack.

can I get sum real feedback, expect this bitch

thsi was aiight nothing really stood out to me.....good vocab...flow was choppy at points but still overall average piece......5/10mics

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