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07-23-04, 05:56 AM | #1 | |||||||
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requiem to the hood
IP: 71AE FF4B
life span shortened, same sad story//
another black man didn't make it to see forty// shit startin to bore me, how can this be possible// lived in fear to long, guns no longer an obstacle// layin in hospitals, doctors livin profitable// hand u a bill, damn! now u gotta robb sumone// cop a gun, tables turned, sumbody gonna bleed// why he had to fight back? he got mouths to feed// our mantality is greed, survival of the fittest// cops found the gat, now u got a life sentence// u finished, now there's two fams wit no man// two single moms makin it anyway they can// wit food stamps and EBC on welfare// on healthcare, get money from elsewhere// no help here, two jobs plus prostitution// five dollar head game, body filled wit pollution// there's no solution, her son pop his vein shooting// product of his enviroment, popped his brain shooting// crooked cops blue suited, moms couldn't have a funeral// cremated and memorial, wateva is affordable//
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07-23-04, 06:14 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 8213 3797
wack.
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07-23-04, 03:11 PM | #3 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 71AE FF4B
can I get sum real feedback, expect this bitch
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07-23-04, 04:03 PM | #4 | ||||||
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thsi was aiight nothing really stood out to me.....good vocab...flow was choppy at points but still overall average piece......5/10mics
return the favor on my Piece intitled Back for the First time
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