A Lil Sumthin For Yall Cuz I aint posted In A While
 

Aight Point Blank Dis Situation I Hate
So Fuckin Suppresed I Can't Think
So Fuckin Depressed I Can't Bank
I'm Talkin No One Listens Cause
My Position Is That Of A Slave In
A Kitchen Lips Closed No Sound
Yellin In Da BackGround Ain't No
Way I Can Back Down Livin Da
Way I Do Bein Compared To Him,
Her,And You.... I'd Be A Fool Not To
Use This Tool Like It's Burnin Hot But
I Don't Jump Into The Pool Try To
Stay Legit But 9 to 5 Ain't Doin It
I Need To Make Dough, Stay Low,
Throw Away My Fuckin Halo Dat I
Never Had Always Bad Learn To Stay
Away Just Like My Fuckin Dad Rap Ain't A
Fad And I Ain't Goin Nowhere As Long
As I Got Dis Pen And Pad Write Till My
Last Breath On My Bed of Death
Remembered As Da Only Angel To
Hell And Back No Scars Not a Scratch
Some Bars And A Track Come Far But
Don't Go Back Would Be Pain No Sunshine
All Rain Not Brave All Fear But They'll
Remember Da Name In Pain

Love And Tears

yo I'm feelin it cuz. jess work on da structure of your future raps. otherwise dats dat shit keep doin wah you do ~one~

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I liked it nice steady even flow, good wordplay. I thought it was well done. lines coulda been a bit longer to shorten up the verse but other than that it was good.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138209

hit mine up, lemme know what u think.

Ill rhymes, keep tha flows comin and stay focused.

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