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Old 07-29-04, 12:52 PM   #1
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Words for the Streets

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(hook) these words come straight from the street
somethin I thought up on a late night creep
whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep
turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets

I ain't feelin all these soft hearted Summer Jams
so I'm back to cram a track like Onyx....SLAM!
word on the street, you only as good as the last
one you killed, these days heads be e-tarded
poppin pills in they grills for cheap thrills
only tree I cut down on streets dat sticky green
split a dutchess with my touches
I roll em thick meaty and mean
'cause these streets is sketchy like stan
lynch mo niggaz daily than the KKK clan
police just another word for an organized gang
cept it's legal when they come on blocks n bang
racism rages strong on inner city streets
strapped down in defeat, wonder why we all got heat?

these words come straight from the street
somethin I thought up on a late night creep
whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep
turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets

All in all, color is irrelevant, my stories accepted
by all humanity when I'm tellin em
although everyday seems to be a test
on my sanity by every one of em
So all my real people get ya hands up to the skies
united we can burn the roof down like Woodstock 99 (da roof da roof)
red, white, n blue is supposed to be there for us to salute
fuck that, here's a mindsnack, blue represents black
because they chain our minds to endless dreams
then rip our hearts out our backs, got soldiers
overseas under the guise of freein iraq
look more to me like a country under attack
Boys bein sent back, disfigured or shellshocked for life
what a sentence to have to hack
Families losin babies of all colors and religions
I'm warnin the world now, Hell's Kitchen,where
we sendin our precious, dammit ya'll, listen!
Then crowd around the tv hope to catch a glimpse
in the end left breathless......The streets is hurtin too
overloaded by cocaine transformed into crack
many lives up n packed, never given a chance to get back
Poverty affects people at all of society's levels
Poverty is me, I'm forced to fend off society's devils
clutchin my cross to my heart, prayin' all hope ain't lost
I'm tryin' to send a message from my block
to the world at whatever the cost...........

these words come straight from the street
somethin I thought up on a late night creep
whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep
turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets

when we was younger, we had it all figured out
No doubts, we could envision our dreams through the clouds
Layin' on my back pointin' shapes out of the sky
prying creativity from my imagination, from inside my mind's eye
reminiscing on this, made me pose question, how do I exist
deepest thoughts bleed from cerebral when blessed with bliss
Try to answer my riddles, understand the connotations
like the golden ratio, PHI, it's the perfect mind equation
Survival is for the fittest in the concrete jungle
steadily on the paper chase, hopin to wrap the biggest bundles
Big face dollars, because bill payments never stop
Rake it hand over fist 'cause I'm exasperated in my place
need to carve out a niche in Hip Hop

these words come straight from the street
somethin I thought up on a late night creep
whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep
turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets

these words come straight from the street
somethin I thought up on a late night creep
whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep
turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets
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Old 07-29-04, 01:18 PM   #2
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damn kizz not bad you really out done yourself this is worthy
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Old 07-29-04, 01:20 PM   #3
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thanks dog, I'm gonna record it into an audio. are you all interested in doing an audio of the My Life track? I'll do the hook n my verse if you want.
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Old 07-29-04, 01:22 PM   #4
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i would love that but i dont have anything to record.
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Old 07-29-04, 02:07 PM   #5
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That was some tru shit comin from a tru artist and cant nobody say that wasn't hot. U keep writin tru words like that cant nobody stop u.
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Old 07-29-04, 02:09 PM   #6
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this was a good drop, and it would sound good in audio, nice man, i like the hook..............
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Old 07-29-04, 02:10 PM   #7
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thanks Nyghtmare, good lookin out dawg
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Old 07-29-04, 02:10 PM   #8
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got that right night. what he said was tru
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Old 07-29-04, 02:13 PM   #9
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much love fluidmoon, stay tuned, I'll be droppin the audio in roughly a week....same name. thanks for the feedback, don't forget to vote ya'll.
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Old 07-29-04, 02:38 PM   #10
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Well, I'm Prolly Not The Best Person To Judge This Because I Dont Do Audio...
So To Me I See A Weak TEXT Piece...
But I Know You Cant Put The Same Shit Into Audio As You Can Text...
But I'll TRY And Critisize With That In Mind...
Flow Was Pretty Tite, Content Was Pretty Decent...
Uuuuum Only Thing I Would Say Needs Work, Hook And Chorus...
Hook Should Diffrent Then The Chorus In My Opinion, Its More Like Drawing In The Listener But Without Showing All Abilities...
And The Chorus Can Be Alittle More Technical...
But Oooooother Than That...
Nice Drop Mayn...
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Old 07-29-04, 02:41 PM   #11
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its pretty good it should be made into a audio the hook
is nice and the verse are pretty good....
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Old 07-29-04, 02:46 PM   #12
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thanks for the feedback Atticus and For$aken much appreciated. good lookin out ya'll.
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Old 07-29-04, 03:19 PM   #13
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this was a hot drop,would sound good on audio.worthy of open mike of july.
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Old 07-29-04, 03:21 PM   #14
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yeah maybe you will get kizz
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Old 07-29-04, 03:29 PM   #15
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Yeah I'm really likin that hook. The verses were tite too. How long it take u ta write that?
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