Words for the Streets
(hook) these words come straight from the street
somethin I thought up on a late night creep whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets I ain't feelin all these soft hearted Summer Jams so I'm back to cram a track like Onyx....SLAM! word on the street, you only as good as the last one you killed, these days heads be e-tarded poppin pills in they grills for cheap thrills only tree I cut down on streets dat sticky green split a dutchess with my touches I roll em thick meaty and mean 'cause these streets is sketchy like stan lynch mo niggaz daily than the KKK clan police just another word for an organized gang cept it's legal when they come on blocks n bang racism rages strong on inner city streets strapped down in defeat, wonder why we all got heat? these words come straight from the street somethin I thought up on a late night creep whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets All in all, color is irrelevant, my stories accepted by all humanity when I'm tellin em although everyday seems to be a test on my sanity by every one of em So all my real people get ya hands up to the skies united we can burn the roof down like Woodstock 99 (da roof da roof) red, white, n blue is supposed to be there for us to salute fuck that, here's a mindsnack, blue represents black because they chain our minds to endless dreams then rip our hearts out our backs, got soldiers overseas under the guise of freein iraq look more to me like a country under attack Boys bein sent back, disfigured or shellshocked for life what a sentence to have to hack Families losin babies of all colors and religions I'm warnin the world now, Hell's Kitchen,where we sendin our precious, dammit ya'll, listen! Then crowd around the tv hope to catch a glimpse in the end left breathless......The streets is hurtin too overloaded by cocaine transformed into crack many lives up n packed, never given a chance to get back Poverty affects people at all of society's levels Poverty is me, I'm forced to fend off society's devils clutchin my cross to my heart, prayin' all hope ain't lost I'm tryin' to send a message from my block to the world at whatever the cost........... these words come straight from the street somethin I thought up on a late night creep whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets when we was younger, we had it all figured out No doubts, we could envision our dreams through the clouds Layin' on my back pointin' shapes out of the sky prying creativity from my imagination, from inside my mind's eye reminiscing on this, made me pose question, how do I exist deepest thoughts bleed from cerebral when blessed with bliss Try to answer my riddles, understand the connotations like the golden ratio, PHI, it's the perfect mind equation Survival is for the fittest in the concrete jungle steadily on the paper chase, hopin to wrap the biggest bundles Big face dollars, because bill payments never stop Rake it hand over fist 'cause I'm exasperated in my place need to carve out a niche in Hip Hop these words come straight from the street somethin I thought up on a late night creep whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets these words come straight from the street somethin I thought up on a late night creep whether rovin in the range, or beepin in the jeep turn this up, let em hear the Words for the streets |
damn kizz not bad you really out done yourself this is worthy
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thanks dog, I'm gonna record it into an audio. are you all interested in doing an audio of the My Life track? I'll do the hook n my verse if you want.
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i would love that but i dont have anything to record.
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That was some tru shit comin from a tru artist and cant nobody say that wasn't hot. U keep writin tru words like that cant nobody stop u.
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this was a good drop, and it would sound good in audio, nice man, i like the hook..............
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thanks Nyghtmare, good lookin out dawg
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got that right night. what he said was tru
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much love fluidmoon, stay tuned, I'll be droppin the audio in roughly a week....same name. thanks for the feedback, don't forget to vote ya'll.
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Well, I'm Prolly Not The Best Person To Judge This Because I Dont Do Audio...
So To Me I See A Weak TEXT Piece... But I Know You Cant Put The Same Shit Into Audio As You Can Text... But I'll TRY And Critisize With That In Mind... Flow Was Pretty Tite, Content Was Pretty Decent... Uuuuum Only Thing I Would Say Needs Work, Hook And Chorus... Hook Should Diffrent Then The Chorus In My Opinion, Its More Like Drawing In The Listener But Without Showing All Abilities... And The Chorus Can Be Alittle More Technical... But Oooooother Than That... Nice Drop Mayn... ~One~ |
its pretty good it should be made into a audio the hook is nice and the verse are pretty good.... |
thanks for the feedback Atticus and For$aken much appreciated. good lookin out ya'll.
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this was a hot drop,would sound good on audio.worthy of open mike of july.
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yeah maybe you will get kizz
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Yeah I'm really likin that hook. The verses were tite too. How long it take u ta write that?
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