Gimme sum feedbac on this
 

:banghead:

Yall say my raps need better structure
Yall feedbac is my instructor,
I thank yall fa lettin me know
If my raps are rite or if they ruffa,
I look to yall fa sum help
Makin sure critasium gets dealt,
I thank yall fa feelin my drops
Cuz my rappin neva stops!





I want to thank erybody who has given me sum helpful feedbac.
An ask dat you keep do it. THANx

gud.nice to know sumone appreciates feedback.

by the way
I thank yall fa lettin me know
If my raps are rite or if they ruffa
^that line didnt rhyme lol.

structures beta though.

thnax Mani

yo gimme sum mo feed bac

Like Manipulation said, it's good to see you appreciate feedback. Other than that, keep elevating dude. I see your structure is better, too. Now you just need the other shit: meta's, multi's, etc. Keep at it.

Thanx GFX stay up nigga

yo sun you ok but you need better metaphores and vocab but your struture looks good

yea it was koo as hell ey can sum one feedback my shit cus i need to no wat i can do to improve, thx peace

feedback
 

when actual feedback is given n not emotional stress cuz of constant periods
feedback willl b respected n tooken noted but when u jus tlk shit no 1 cares

no problem uk peeps forget wut feedback sumtimes means though u kno ignorance leaves peeps desperate n forgetful thanx 4 leavin feedback on my shit in da past keep doin ya thing n fuck da hataz

yo thanx yall keep tha feedbac comin

Short n dat but overall it was aite n had a nice flow keep it up....peace.....holla.....

Short n dat but overall it was aite n had a nice flow keep it up....peace.....holla.....

Thanx JaggyA Keep da feedbac comin

yeah its gd to know some1 app's feedbac and stuff...........but uhh what u wrote didnt rhyme yo..........anyhow keep it up

Thanx