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DQ 08-01-04 05:48 AM

I love NY
 
Thousand miles apart, seperated by the Atlantic
He gives another sense to a simple word as romantic
Wasn't searchin but something truly special is what i found
When we started talkin i lost all touch with the solid ground
A smile appears on my face every time i hear him speak
Seems like i've known him forever when its only been a week
Day is incomplete without him,the king of my entire world
Just lookin at him drives me crazy,my mind totally twirled
People call it mission impossible,we'll proof them wrong
No matter what,we'll make it, the feeling is too strong
His touch makes me high,i'm flying to the clouds above
Parents don't approve but this is not some puppy love
You're a part of who i am,distance won't bring us down
Those eyes got me fascinated by that hypnotizing brown
Makin up our own words,dreamin about gettin on a plane
to be with him,i would risk everythin,don't call me insane
one of these days i'ma say bye to Belgium,hello to NY
when i see him,my only fear is: will i be able to say hi

All i want is my NY boi

G_$peed 08-01-04 06:00 AM

i liked it nice girl keep it up

raw killa 08-01-04 07:03 AM

hey jess wuddup ma? nice drop for real dat words from da heart holla back n keep doin u mami

DQ 08-01-04 04:09 PM

Thx for feedback raw, i'm fine btw

MADDRAPPER 08-01-04 04:35 PM

oh I was from BELGIUM wearing a gown a cutie brown, booty round. met a boy from NYC like a gift to my click just lift and stick it in and I'll just moan and groan at home while we bone so strong, in deep search can't keep in touch make me freak so much he's hood buffed and good enough to take me in bed bive him cake so red, even though I'm across the Atlantic , got a boss Titanic he should cum and sink

DQ 08-01-04 04:57 PM

^Thx i guess...lmao...nice drop MADD...

DQ 08-03-04 03:03 AM

^uppin^

5MICMEDALLION 08-03-04 03:07 AM

I was feeling your structure and your words,,,,I think it was well written,,,nice work...
God bless all

DQ 08-03-04 03:35 PM

Drop ya feedback and ya links, i'll return tha favor peepz!

~1~

DQ 08-05-04 09:55 AM

^uppin^ btw, this is some real shit...

raw killa 08-05-04 10:00 AM

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peep my new callaboration wit emerginmc07 on here n peep my otha shit new shit sumtin ayt holla back at me mami

EmerginMc07 08-05-04 10:06 AM

yo gurl u did yo thing i felt that i like that 2, dat shit was deep i felt that fer realm but uh yea peep dat collabo n give us some feedback on that, uh but ne way keep doin yo thing

DQ 08-05-04 06:20 PM

Thx ^uppin this real piece^

DQ 08-07-04 05:37 AM

up...up....up

Cerulean 08-07-04 08:33 AM

yeah this was really good, you have good vocab and structure and the topic/story was nice also... definitely feeling this, good drop!

check out "cruel contemplations" if you got time... thanks


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