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08-01-04, 05:48 AM | #1 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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I love NY
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Thousand miles apart, seperated by the Atlantic He gives another sense to a simple word as romantic Wasn't searchin but something truly special is what i found When we started talkin i lost all touch with the solid ground A smile appears on my face every time i hear him speak Seems like i've known him forever when its only been a week Day is incomplete without him,the king of my entire world Just lookin at him drives me crazy,my mind totally twirled People call it mission impossible,we'll proof them wrong No matter what,we'll make it, the feeling is too strong His touch makes me high,i'm flying to the clouds above Parents don't approve but this is not some puppy love You're a part of who i am,distance won't bring us down Those eyes got me fascinated by that hypnotizing brown Makin up our own words,dreamin about gettin on a plane to be with him,i would risk everythin,don't call me insane one of these days i'ma say bye to Belgium,hello to NY when i see him,my only fear is: will i be able to say hi All i want is my NY boi
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08-01-04, 06:00 AM | #2 | ||||
$Thug Life$
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i liked it nice girl keep it up
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08-01-04, 07:03 AM | #3 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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hey jess wuddup ma? nice drop for real dat words from da heart holla back n keep doin u mami
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08-01-04, 04:09 PM | #4 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: DDFB 95DD
Thx for feedback raw, i'm fine btw
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08-01-04, 04:35 PM | #5 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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oh I was from BELGIUM wearing a gown a cutie brown, booty round. met a boy from NYC like a gift to my click just lift and stick it in and I'll just moan and groan at home while we bone so strong, in deep search can't keep in touch make me freak so much he's hood buffed and good enough to take me in bed bive him cake so red, even though I'm across the Atlantic , got a boss Titanic he should cum and sink
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08-01-04, 04:57 PM | #6 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: DDFB 95DD
^Thx i guess...lmao...nice drop MADD...
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08-03-04, 03:03 AM | #7 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 0F14 5B16
^uppin^
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08-03-04, 03:07 AM | #8 | |||||||
Light Weight
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I was feeling your structure and your words,,,,I think it was well written,,,nice work...
God bless all
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08-03-04, 03:35 PM | #9 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: BADC A59C
Drop ya feedback and ya links, i'll return tha favor peepz!
~1~
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08-05-04, 09:55 AM | #10 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: C11A 6193
^uppin^ btw, this is some real shit...
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08-05-04, 10:00 AM | #11 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: A164 FAE3
jess baby girl holla at me on yahoo
peep my new callaboration wit emerginmc07 on here n peep my otha shit new shit sumtin ayt holla back at me mami
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08-05-04, 10:06 AM | #12 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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yo gurl u did yo thing i felt that i like that 2, dat shit was deep i felt that fer realm but uh yea peep dat collabo n give us some feedback on that, uh but ne way keep doin yo thing
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08-05-04, 06:20 PM | #13 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
Thx ^uppin this real piece^
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08-07-04, 05:37 AM | #14 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 46C2 FF91
up...up....up
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08-07-04, 08:33 AM | #15 | |||||||
Light Weight
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yeah this was really good, you have good vocab and structure and the topic/story was nice also... definitely feeling this, good drop!
check out "cruel contemplations" if you got time... thanks
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