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demobx vs BostonLyricist
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BostonLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 01:09 PM.
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demobx has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 02:05 PM.
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No time to solicit time to get explicit split you in half get horrific /guts hanging as im spitting/ went big apple picking when u decided to battle/ nyc status leave ya dismangled /like hannibal leaves his victims in his stomach gutted carcass tangled /around my words cause you couldn't handle/ Became my prey /its a jungle in this bitch should have watched your back before you came to this shit in May/ Okay you say you from the "Mean streets of Boston" / Your life its costin /thinking your gansta could beat this newyorkin /Im extortin /execution style bring the revolution im shootin make you start abortin /feel the torment /cut off all your fat like George Forman /getting in your skin like a scorpion /I'm shortining your life span /
Like I can -and I am- as I am prophesizing the end of your lyrical plan./ banned forever left you mute/ a couple of lines back when I decided to execute /then next threw you down the garbage chute /your remains salute the rats, rodents meet your crew/ that you never knew /destiny inevitably set its fate on you /your calling to be left in the stench that you tried to spew /In this game its a clue game trying to figure out who did what -with what -and what triggered -you'll never figure it out cuz uze a pussy nigga And I bet you never figured that this killa Is the opposite of a dick Yes a chick put the poisen to your liva' |
Boston vs the bronx hollah at me
dis boy a gay stippa n da bronx thats why he boogie downs// a pussy rapper sniffed out by real mc bood hounds// he slips himself a date rape pill and jacks off// so when he wake up in the mourn he dont remeber he wacked off// even if your ryhmes had a power button the wouldnt work// you smell like couchie wit no panties, in a sauna underneath a skirt// Even if you lived on the equator you wouldn’t be hot// I tear apart brick city and make it a bus stop// Boston vs the bronx watch me paint it green// Have all its occupants including you lookin like a steven king scene// Your fans fall asleep to your demo so your cd comes wit caffine// Lyriacl sporadic shots to your temple explode your mind// Your like the pacific coast time zone your always behind// I finish you with a ryhme death blow to your vocals flood your lungs// You’re a virgin to a win like sex to nuns// Holl at cha boi |
Voted For: BostonLyricist
Boston-you used a few personals about his location...overplayed the gay shit though, i didnt like that...some good punches..a decent strutcture n flow demobx-your structure is wack as fuck dude...learn how to battle right...do it in lines and make sure they're the same length...you had punches n personals..but your structure was just way to wack |
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Voted For: demobx
ima have to give this battle to demobox bcuz i was feelin him bringin back the o'l school G-rap style n makin it work maybe need to work on the structure a lil more but otha than that the flow was nice n personals woere good holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344 __________________ |
Voted For: demobx
Boston, you had a really tight punch with that "pacific time" line, and along with all your other lines you got my vote. Dem, you got a really strong flow though, and either of you hit me up if you ever wanna battle. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139258 drop a vote, I'll return the favor. |
Shit, I'm sorry, that was the wrong link, that goes to one of my "open mic" verses.
Here's the battle vs. Avanish. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941 |
Voted For: demobx
Oooh ight calm down man u went hard it paid off both verses I can dig demo u win wit ur constant punchin and jabbin BL u was good too but this verse had more punches personals and fire u had they fuel jus didn't use it as much as u cud and shud. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 Both of you shudn't put '/' or '//' at the end of your lines jus structure it so we can get your flow and rhyme BL you have a good structure minus da '//'. demo structure your rhyme betta so it it's easier to read nice verse tho' keep it up watch the structure of BL. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 |
Voted For: BostonLyricist
he slips himself a date rape pill and jacks off// so when he wake up in the mourn he dont remeber he wacked off// that was pretty funny Demi had a fucked up flow , structure and didnt really have a good battle verse either. Vote Boston , funnier verse , more originol and better dissiing and wordplay |
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