blackmagik vs BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
 

Battle Rules:

6 to 10 lines 10 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 09:49 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 06:50 PM.

here i go facin blackmagik he's new to/
thats not the right thing to say when you see me or ill do/
twist you up throw you in the pen with my dawg/
he'll eat you up and leave the bones to rot on a log/
im from the west we dont fuck with the rest/
and yer the lest so i took you out now im goin for the best/
now you wont hafe to afrayd of me cuz it'll be over in 1day/
cuz i dont fuck around to much with people that are gay/
if you kno what i mean ill leave you thur and drive away/
and you'll lay on the ground cuz my dawg eat you up/

i was gonna write more not anofe room only 10 lines you put yer verse in now bitch

uppin for votes any one

BlackMagik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 07:57 PM.

aight look...

Ima let this cat know that battlin me is just straight foolish
how you gon bring ya weak ass to a rapper who straight ruthless?
c'mon dawg, you know you dont really wanna fight me
I spit so mutha-fuckin hard, my words make the mic bleed
bitch bite me, ya words dont hurt me, I like pain
I'm the champion, and like ya avatar says, your just light weight
ya ass aint street, and I'mma let u know, your raps is weak
I'ma treat you just like the titanic, the way that you'll crash and sink

uppin for votes sumbody!!!!! Vote on this shit!!!

would sum 1 please vote on this motherfucking battle?

Voted For: BlackMagik

I'ma vote for BlackMagik on this one, but honestly neither of your posts were all that great. Brother, you drop just had no substance, and you dropped 1 too many lines about your dog. Black, at the end of your drop it felt like it was just beginning, but you got my vote because you had better lines and your drop actually made sense.
vote-BlackMagik

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Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

ok both of your verses was wack 2 me.....
they both had self glory and had confusin punches
but i had 2 break it down

punches:brother
structure: black
flow: brother
multis:black
metas: brother
overall liked verse: brother

Voted For: BlackMagik


here i go facin blackmagik he's new to/
thats not the right thing to say when you see me or ill do/
6/10
twist you up throw you in the pen with my dawg/
he'll eat you up and leave the bones to rot on a log/
4/10
im from the west we dont fuck with the rest/
and yer the lest so i took you out now im goin for the best/
5/10
now you wont hafe to afrayd of me cuz it'll be over in 1day/
cuz i dont fuck around to much with people that are gay/
4/10
if you kno what i mean ill leave you thur and drive away/
and you'll lay on the ground cuz my dawg eat you up/
1/10


Ima let this cat know that battlin me is just straight foolish
how you gon bring ya weak ass to a rapper who straight ruthless?
6/10
c'mon dawg, you know you dont really wanna fight me
I spit so mutha-fuckin hard, my words make the mic bleed
6/10
bitch bite me, ya words dont hurt me, I like pain
I'm the champion, and like ya avatar says, your just light weight
ya ass aint street, and I'mma let u know, your raps is weak
6/10
I'ma treat you just like the titanic, the way that you'll crash and sink
6/10

came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay

This was feedback posted for BlackMagik
 

damn BackMagik got his ass! DAMN........ shit jusss Damn........ im sorry but Brother is weak......

Voted For: BlackMagik

vote: blackmagik

for actually throwing a punch

the "light weight" line was enough to win it in my opinion

Voted For: BlackMagik

both of ya need more creativity in ur flow, nothin much was original. But overall, BlackMagik get the win...

Voted For: BlackMagik

brother what was that good flow no punches or good disses at all.black good flow ok 4th line you also had no good personals or disses except you light weight like ya avator says lol on that but black gets the vote with a better verse and much better vocab