Complex Illness(0-1) vs. Caliph (0-1)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
20line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

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ohhhhhhhh shit i aint even know i was here check checkkkkkkk :thumbup:

battles i voted on....
vote-raw material
vote-shadow
vote-vango
vote-j-poll
vote-willydexter

I got a ''ILLNESS''thats 'COMPLEX'
im sick of 'actors' /pardon me rappers
who think they can bomb vets
you constantly sunned /aint got a gun
closest you come is palming ya text(techs ha ha im so original)

Dont type you'd be better off resigning in silence
all them posts/ you get no votes
you could'nt be 'ILL' with magic johnson's virus

You need to elevate cuz i cant see you from this high up
you too low/ and ya flow
like rain in the desert it quickly drys up
i wont stop/like a broke watch
consider this that ya times up

Whoaaa Dog fix da Structure lookz like some 1 beat u uip and shit
lol


Yo u aint slick tryna fit tha extra shit its not in tho
U Say ur lifes "HARD" yea cause u try to spit thru a Bullet Proof Window
Im killin u im a Great artist but Caliph ya gotta go
Structure like that is when some 1 beat u bad ya gotta kno
So i Flow niceley punches Correct, Direct for ya head
If i cant get them now ill get um in ur bed
and if they alll connect this dude will be DEAD
So watz up wit dis bitch so ass dont even Repersent a Sig
Well 1 more time but look i think Caliph Repersents a Retarted-Kid

u both are talentless in txt battles.

V/ for COmplex for not usin played time..."ill" & txt lines.

v/ complex illness for coming less wack

caliph you need to elevate alot..

V/ Complex For A Better Verse And Not As Wack As Caliph

Even Though Caliph Has 60 Fucknig Posts A Day It Don't Make You Elevate

So You Need Elevation

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complex, i cant even break this down its that wack. his verse was the less wacker of the two.

v-complex

Vote Complex... Weak Battle... Overal Better Verse, Both Flowed Ok, Complex Hard Better/More Punches On A Consistant Basis Compared To Caliphs... And Caliphs Structure Is All Over The Place..

Vote- Complex

V/Complex Illnes....like everyone said weak battle

Cal ur structure was terrible and ur punches were basic and uneffective...CI ur verse was weak but there was a better flow and structure and the punches weren't as whack...and i saw at least one personal

caliph
you had a madd wack verse..shit was straight boring for real though
punches were damn wack...damn stupid verse..ur punches fuckin suck..
man for real quit..just quit rappin..i hope ya better at topicals cuz if not
this site has nothing to offer...for u
overall 1.3/10

complex...
vrse was also wack but not nearly as wack...fuckin weak punches but you won
becuz of better punches and personals
3.7/10