deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
20line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

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check

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1468962

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I'm Back... But I Don't Need One

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heh .

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1468042
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139345
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1468392

I was just with ya girl, boy.. go ahead & ask her G
You'd think my son was Lil' Romeo the way I Master P
Kid can't get past me, links in ya sig ain't just traces
But they're pure wackness.. on a consistant basis
Theres ya chance 2 recooperate bitch, don't take 2 long
Frontin' like u well known? JP even spelt ya name wrong
Cuz I'm so far ahead of P, he sees nothing butt ass
Fucka trash!.. yeah you, I'm keystylin' just like that
Knock P out so bad..
......When I'm champ he still won't have his sight back

edit:blah if you show...i'll edit in the rest of my lines

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Genesis

Watch me kill this biter. Like sharp-shooters, he wont be missed.
But at least he named his sources.... his sig says.... Genesis!
For the hall of shame, I'll record him, but mostly rec (wreck) this fake.
Told him to stick with people his age.... and he got arrested for child rape.
No hate, I drop bombs on BS, so Willy, I sunk yah.
truth is, your bars still wouldn't be sweet if you replaced Dex with Wonka.
He reminds me of Fox tv series, Will and Grace in reality.
Cause in this battle he's out of place, just like his sexuality.
I'll rip at your mentality.. just to leave you with an open mind.
and yeah your verses are killer.... just cause they commit suicide..
Theres nothing to hide, checked his title and was like "how can shit fly?"
Wise men learn from their mistakes, keeps trying, guess thats the reason why.
I checked your rhymes and thought it was wack, doubt I was the first.
cause he has better luck assembling disses, connecting dots in my verse.

blah. Better than no-show.

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I'm Back... But I Don't Need One

I was just with ya girl, boy.. go ahead & ask her G
You'd think my son was Lil' Romeo the way I Master P
2/5 First Part Was Wack, Second Part Decent


Kid can't get past me, links in ya sig ain't just traces
But they're pure wackness.. on a consistant basis
2/5 Ok, No Big Punch

Theres ya chance 2 recooperate bitch, don't take 2 long
Frontin' like u well known? JP even spelt ya name wrong
lol 4/5 Good Punch

Cuz I'm so far ahead of P, he sees nothing butt ass
Fucka trash!.. yeah you, I'm keystylin' just like that
Knock P out so bad..
......When I'm champ he still won't have his sight back
Ok, Flow Was Good, 3/5

Willy Dexter Overal: 11/20

Watch me kill this biter. Like sharp-shooters, he wont be missed.
But at least he named his sources.... his sig says.... Genesis!
2/5 Ok Punch

For the hall of shame, I'll record him, but mostly rec (wreck) this fake.
Told him to stick with people his age.... and he got arrested for child rape.
Ok 2/5

No hate, I drop bombs on BS, so Willy, I sunk yah.
truth is, your bars still wouldn't be sweet if you replaced Dex with Wonka.
Ok Punch, Could Have Been Worded Better 2/5

He reminds me of Fox tv series, Will and Grace in reality.
Cause in this battle he's out of place, just like his sexuality.
Weak Punch 1/5

Ill rip at your mentality.. just to leave you with an open mind.
and yeah your verses are killer.... just cause they commit suicide..
No Big Punch 1/5 Flow Was Good

Theres nothing to hide, checked his title and was like "how can shit fly?"
Wise men learn from their mistakes, keeps trying, guess thats the reason why.
Decent, 3/5

I checked your rhymes and thought it was wack, doubt I was the first.
cause he has better luck assembling disses, connecting dots in my verse.
Not The Best Finisher, 2/5

Perfect Shun= 13/35....


--------Will Edit With Changes After Viewing Rest Of Willys Verse-------

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^Umm ok but that wasn't his whole verse.

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I'm Back... But I Don't Need One

Nevermind I See... Didnt See That Before... Ill Edit Voted Until Rest Are Posted-

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kronuz you dick your voting is retarded how you gonna add bars like that per spit more bars so of course hes gonna score higher yous a fucking idiot!!!!back to voting percept good flow which you both had good second line diss 8th line was funny and your 10th was a good punch but your fourth line was madd corny and the rest of your punches aint hit.willy good ass personal on the second line and that j-poll spelled ya name wrong was sick cuz most mcs wouldnt have caught that your punches all connected good and thats what gave you the battle.
vote-willydexter

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A.I

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

I was just with ya girl, boy.. go ahead & ask her G
You'd think my son was Lil' Romeo the way I Master P
Theres ya chance 2 recooperate bitch, don't take 2 long
Frontin' like u well known? JP even spelt ya name wrong#

^not that original & didnt like the rest of ur verse.

For the hall of shame, I'll record him, but mostly rec (wreck) this fake.
Told him to stick with people his age.... and he got arrested for child rape.
No hate, I drop bombs on BS, so Willy, I sunk yah.
truth is, your bars still wouldn't be sweet if you replaced Dex with Wonka.
He reminds me of Fox tv series, Will and Grace in reality.
Cause in this battle he's out of place, just like his sexuality.
I'll rip at your mentality.. just to leave you with an open mind.
and yeah your verses are killer.... just cause they commit suicide..

that took it...very suprising V/ Pecept Shun

Percept shun took this easily, I like your punches, surprisingly came alot harder than expected. favorite line of the battle was Theres nothing to hide, checked his title and was like "how can shit fly?"
Wise men learn from their mistakes, keeps trying, guess thats the reason why.


willy wasnt really feeling your verse. i think you would have had a shot had you brought it, looks like a no show verse.


vote -percept shun

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

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willy dexter: damn your personals were off the fucking chai, nice tite personals i loved your strater and you good, nice punches

percept shun:lol you didnt have as good personals was willy but you punches were tite and you got good structure i like you starter and your closing was iiight

willy: 7.99
percept shun:8.05
percept shun wins this by a micrometer lol

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

1. he posted after the due date

2. i said i would edit my verse if he showed

so either 1 of 2 things will happen

he is disqaulified for droppin' late

or

i get to edit my verse in anbd none of those votes count

you decide

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Genesis

my bad then

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!