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Lightweight Contendership Match- Durmil(2-1) vs. Shadow(2-1)
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!! |
we meet again lol...
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so we do meet again..lol good luck...
voted: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1465502 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1476932 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139344 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1476982 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1477002 |
u checked in..and u realize you can cheat death..its ur fate-dude... you must love to lose.i could call you wack and still overrate you... i aint wack..so what the hell blueprint tryin ta recruit me for..?... shits gettin old..i allready beat you..jpoll must want an encore... a contendor?ur gassed up time to pull your "train" to a hault..... son your talenless..cant help that...but even trying is your fault... match ur creativitie ?to get on my level..ud have to times ur skill by 3.. the way your punches hit i could be gunit101 and u still cant match me... u got d/r.. but i dont see how..ur terrible..how can anyone be a fan of ya?... 4all the wackness..on this site..ill be like south park..and BLAME CANADA!!... his ridiculed wackness..is the blueprint for me to diminsh him.... this is gettin old ...... like mortal combat even have jpoll yellin .........FINISH HIM!! .......... |
Referring Me To 'Grow? Sure'(Grocer) Then Watch As I 'Can' Ya Team
Brilliant 'Mind'? Only ''Depth'' In Ya 'Thoughts' Comes In ''Atlantis'' 'Dreams' I'm Stompin Ya, Your Beneath Me Like Gum On The Bottom Of My Shoe And The Only Real Reason I Call You 'Shadow' Is Cuz 'Im Always Above You' You Came Off The Wall, Well I Throw You Back Into Walls Of Concrete Fuck I'll Join A 'Government Movemen't Just To Leave 'Shadow On The Street' Beat You Down With Books As I Dodge Ur Whack Jabs And Deliver Hooks Shadow Still Couldn't "Pen A Trait" A Girl Writting A 'Description Of Her Looks' You've Got No Complexity, After Im Done With You I'll Murk Your Entire Crew This Battle Been Like 'Prince Crip Walking' Cuz Ya Gettin Left 'Purple And Blue' (Punch Of The Week Folks) I Might As Well Of 'Battle'd the Fuckin Ground' Cuz J-Poll Got Me 'Facin Dirt This Loss Is A Burden Of 'Five 0's On Ya Chest' Like An 'Olympic T-Shirt' Explinations: Your Always Above Your Shadow Goverment Movements Occur On The Street (where i would be keeping his shadow) Five 0's=0 votes....its a burdern on his chest like an olympic t-shirt (olympic t- shirt has Five 0's) Purple (Prince) and Blue (Crips)....= Bruise Everything else should be understood (wordplay personals etc....) Vote! |
u checked in..and u realize you can cheat death..its ur fate-dude...
you must love to lose.i could call you wack and still overrate you... -played to death i aint wack..so what the hell blueprint tryin ta recruit me for..?... shits gettin old..i allready beat you..jpoll must want an encore... -no a contendor?ur gassed up time to pull your "train" to a hault..... son your talenless..cant help that...but even trying is your fault... -no match ur creativitie ?to get on my level..ud have to times ur skill by 3.. the way your punches hit i could be gunit101 and u still cant match me... -hells no u got d/r.. but i dont see how..ur terrible..how can anyone be a fan of ya?... 4all the wackness..on this site..ill be like south park..and BLAME CANADA!!... -no his ridiculed wackness..is the blueprint for me to diminsh him.... this is gettin old ...... like mortal combat even have jpoll yellin -umm no wackass verse Referring Me To 'Grow? Sure'(Grocer) Then Watch As I 'Can' Ya Team Brilliant 'Mind'? Only ''Depth'' In Ya 'Thoughts' Comes In ''Atlantis'' 'Dreams' --that was annoying, connect ya punches I'm Stompin Ya, Your Beneath Me Like Gum On The Bottom Of My Shoe And The Only Real Reason I Call You 'Shadow' Is Cuz 'Im Always Above You' --no You Came Off The Wall, Well I Throw You Back Into Walls Of Concrete Fuck I'll Join A 'Government Movemen't Just To Leave 'Shadow On The Street' --set up sucked ass punch was almost Beat You Down With Books As I Dodge Ur Whack Jabs And Deliver Hooks Shadow Still Couldn't "Pen A Trait" A Girl Writting A 'Description Of Her Looks' -good You've Got No Complexity, After Im Done With You I'll Murk Your Entire Crew This Battle Been Like 'Prince Crip Walking' Cuz Ya Gettin Left 'Purple And Blue' -blah (Punch Of The Week Folks) I Might As Well Of 'Battle'd the Fuckin Ground' Cuz J-Poll Got Me 'Facin Dirt This Loss Is A Burden Of 'Five 0's On Ya Chest' Like An 'Olympic T-Shirt' -didn't connect so no v) Durm sucked less and had 1 good punch shadow - quit before you get in too deep.. seriously |
^^^wow u must be the most incredible netcee ever all ur ever doin is tellin everyone they suck and shit...it kinda funny lol
anyways yea more votes |
on this site... thats all i CAN do
you want me to edit my vote? stfu |
Stop freeposting..
Durmil one more time and you lose your potential title shot |
Good Shit People Liked Durmiz Punches Mo' and his Personals Shadows flow waz Bettah
u checked in..and u realize you can cheat death..its ur fate-dude... you must love to lose.i could call you wack and still overrate you... Good Opener 7/10 i aint wack..so what the hell blueprint tryin ta recruit me for..?... shits gettin old..i allready beat you..jpoll must want an encore... Not Very good 5/10 a contendor?ur gassed up time to pull your "train" to a hault..... son your talenless..cant help that...but even trying is your fault... Lol Funny shit 7/10!! match ur creativitie ?to get on my level..ud have to times ur skill by 3.. the way your punches hit i could be gunit101 and u still cant match me... Good 1 7/10!! u got d/r.. but i dont see how..ur terrible..how can anyone be a fan of ya?... 4all the wackness..on this site..ill be like south park..and BLAME CANADA!!... Allright 6/10!! his ridiculed wackness..is the blueprint for me to diminsh him.... this is gettin old ...... like mortal combat even have jpoll yellin finish him... Okay 5/10 37/60 Referring Me To 'Grow? Sure'(Grocer) Then Watch As I 'Can' Ya Team Brilliant 'Mind'? Only ''Depth'' In Ya 'Thoughts' Comes In ''Atlantis'' 'Dreams' Hot opener 8/10 I'm Stompin Ya, Your Beneath Me Like Gum On The Bottom Of My Shoe And The Only Real Reason I Call You 'Shadow' Is Cuz 'Im Always Above You' Hott shit 8/10!! You Came Off The Wall, Well I Throw You Back Into Walls Of Concrete Fuck I'll Join A 'Government Movemen't Just To Leave 'Shadow On The Street' Hott Shit 8/10!! Beat You Down With Books As I Dodge Ur Whack Jabs And Deliver Hooks Shadow Still Couldn't "Pen A Trait" A Girl Writting A 'Description Of Her Looks' Allright 6/10!! You've Got No Complexity, After Im Done With You I'll Murk Your Entire Crew This Battle Been Like 'Prince Crip Walking' Cuz Ya Gettin Left 'Purple And Blue' iight 7/10!! (Punch Of The Week Folks) I Might As Well Of 'Battle'd the Fuckin Ground' Cuz J-Poll Got Me 'Facin Dirt This Loss Is A Burden Of 'Five 0's On Ya Chest' Like An 'Olympic T-Shirt' Hot Closer 8/10!! 44/60 V/Durmil |
yo niggas need to stop dickriding and thinking they smart when they dumb as fuck.shadows 4th bar was a gansta power diss have j-poll yelling for a encore(the blueprint is they crew and encore the jay-z track)good wordplay on that sun.shadow had a good opener good struture and flow and your ender was good 3rd line was a hard shut down fo real and that was some gansta shit with the bar'blame canada'lol :laugh: durmil you lost only cuz shadows punches were harder you had good flow and struture and i was feeling your wordplay plus you had a hard ass ender but you aint throw hard enough disses and punches to stop shadow.
vote-shadow |
decent battle
shadow- ok verse pretty cool punches ok vocab i think you could of use better punches in your verse to make it better alright personals 7.0/10 Due- again ok verse some punches were good others we're blah decent vocab im going with what had me more interested since it was pretty close 6.7/10 v/shadow |
Durm drop the fuckin ego. If ur punches were THAT good u wudnt need 2 take up half a post explainin them or "quotating" them. Dam I hate when half decent kids get an ego.
Anyways..u took this...shadow came prettyy garbage like. & durm came better. |
shadow- ok verse pretty not bad punches.....vocab was okay......i know that you could reword your shit so that your punches hit harder in your verse to make it better alright personals
7.0/10 Due- not a bad verse but you didnt have good enuf shit this time... Close though 6.8/10 |
3-2 shadow wins
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