JPOLL
your verse was nice..links were nessecery your structure was nice
your ender was nice..your operner was fair..all around necely done verse
good wordplay..good punches and nice personals...
overalll
8.4/10

apotheosis
you structure was a tie with jpoll..u had weaker punches and weaker personals
your flow was nice..but i didnt feel you matched up in personals
opener was ok..not great... ender was..fair..all around fair verse
8.0/10
jpoll came harder..as a result he won..
my vote J