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FLooZe 08-03-04 03:56 PM

Can’t Fuck wit me-Freestyle
 
Can’t Fuck wit me


My verbal annihilation eliminates all suspicion of outside competition…
No need,for a repetition, my rhymes are like a revelation, so please save,the standing ovations…
I conquered, all the hearts in this vast nation, shattered, all emcee’s rap or political ambitions…
I fucking cut all circulation, no matter what situation, my supremecy is always here for observations…
Consider me a lyrical scientist, for discovering the new boundaries that exist…
At the same time, I’m like a fucking rapist for fucking up all the shit talking emcees that exist…
Before you try to beef with this lyrical poet, one thing I’ll say in case you didn’t know it is that your turn will come too I just haven’t noted it…
If, by accident my genius falls of I’ll have The Council merk you so bad you’ll run away to Venus…
My crew, starts the revolution, too late, for recapitulation, were already too far into the situation…
One thing to remember is that I cant be fucked wit, no matter how good you claim you can spit, my shit will always humiliate your click and mix…BITCH!

Feedback appreciated

MsBoOtYpHaT4U69 08-03-04 04:00 PM

Shit was hot! Fa sho! Keep doin ya thing!

FLooZe 08-03-04 04:05 PM

yo thx^!!.uppin

Abraxas 08-03-04 05:07 PM

nice drop nice open mic you probably need some rewording and redoing some lines

5/10

FLooZe 08-03-04 06:28 PM

uppin 4 feedback...

FLooZe 08-03-04 07:54 PM

uppin this again...

DV8 08-04-04 12:40 AM

i thought it was good..7/10..but jus something bout havin fucking n genius in the same verse kinda strikes me ta be odd,you had good vocab but i think ya should remove fuckin for better vocab..jus my opinion...its deffinately not a 5/10..

my shits gettin slept on hard...can ya hit something up..

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FLooZe 08-04-04 01:28 AM

uppin 4 feedback...

KroNuz 08-04-04 01:48 AM

already seen this.. you know what i think... nice drop tho.. peep my key

eph 08-04-04 01:52 AM

Rep that shit Hard. CounciL.

FLooZe 08-04-04 01:59 AM

^Word up.thx 4 all the feedback.uppin still fo more...

Introspect. 08-04-04 04:27 AM

it was so so structure was off

FLooZe 08-04-04 02:21 PM

uppin...


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