Andy vs BlackMagik
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 07:35 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

BlackMagik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 06:52 PM.

Andy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 06:53 PM.

look...

How the hell this cat gon' try and battle me?
c'mon dawg! ya might as well just have a seat
the rappin' king, do like the rest and ass-kiss me
Andy's ass's gonna get cracked for fucking wit black magic b
you aint on my level homie, you're just fuckin worthless
cuz dawg I'm packin more bricks then fuckin construction workers
bustin burners, a one way ticket to hell, trust me
and if the shells just HAPPEN to miss, then consider ya self lucky
dawg you just plain suck, and believe me, you'll stay lame
how you gon' be a rapper, and dont even have a stage name?
When I'm comin steady with the hottness to make you scream out DAMN
cuz compared to mine, ya rhymes come up short, like Urcles pants
dont give a fuck if ya dont like me, you can spit some shit to spite me
but suckin my dick is the closest you'll ever CUM to spittin like me

you think u can beat me cus im new,
guess what im gonna fuk u, me and my crew
im so good you even like my style
im bout 2 take ur black ass and walk it down the green mile.
im the king of dropping verses im the king of 2 liners
dont get in my way cus ill fuk u up like micheal myers

Voted For: BlackMagik

Andy - "im the king of dropping verses im the king of 2 liners"
well...you sure aint the king of this battle, wack rhymes with the worst punches...elevate man...

Black Magik - good drop, good structure and good flow, some good rhymes, and better punches then Andy had....

V/Black Magik

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Voted For: BlackMagik

aight................ neither of em were great or anythin.......... but Black wrote more and had more flow to his rhyme, and Andy's 6 lines were weak anywyas...
Magik: structure, quality
it was a tie between punchlines
Andy: u didnt really have him on anythin, but u a rook anyways...

This was feedback posted for Andy
 

no content brah all you did was talk about yourself basically you seriously need tah elevate...stayup though...

damn i thought you were suppose to give feedback on both then vote guess not
well black if you can get strobe to edit in my vote you got it cuz you just all around got this kid cause you actually dropped a verse with punches and that way bettah structure and flow all around bettah verse ...

Voted For: BlackMagik

Blak Magik won stikin wit da plan wit da 16 lines and accual punchlines Andy u need work go to Tutorials this aint a diss learn the Punchlines and Personals u get better a word of Advice

Blak

Flow 5/10
structure 5/10
Punches 7/10
Rhymez 6/10
23/40

Andy

Flow 4/10
structure 5/10
Punches 5/10
Rhymez 5/10
19/40

V/Blak

^^^uppin thanx homies for droppin ya opinions uppin

Voted For: BlackMagik

Andy

you think u can beat me cus im new,
guess what im gonna fuk u, me and my crew
--Wack, no punch...retarded line 3/10
im so good you even like my style
im bout 2 take ur black ass and walk it down the green mile.
--Wack again....if it would of had a better line the green mile line coulda been a good punch 4/10
im the king of dropping verses im the king of 2 liners
dont get in my way cus ill fuk u up like micheal myers
--wack...no punch...self glorification...crap 2/10

Overall: 9/30
Definitely elevate try to throw some punches in your verse it really helps

Not going into evaluating BM's verse....Andy, that was a wack drop..eleveate, throw punches, use multis even

Vote=Black Magic, better structure, more punches

Voted For: BlackMagik

aight this was'nt a very good battle.the first verse flat out sucked srry dawg it really did,second verse well had some played wordplay n plaYED PUNCHES so i gotta give it to ya...both need elevation..keep tryin..
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