first time free styling
 

Just a redneck from the sticks
probally cant rap to save my dick
but what the hell ill give it a try
some of you think this is so bad
i should just dye
end my life
cunt my self with a surgical knife
nuttin really left to say
thats it for today
maybe later i can come out and play
im going to bed
wake up to the sound of the
rhode island red
and thats the end of this thread

what ya think

yo dawg, work on yo wordplay, vocab, structure, and punches, jus keep practisin and ull elevate, iite dawg peep me n raw killa spittin da shit on our collabo, iite 1 love

that wasent bad for a freestyle that was really good lol you had flow but when yer makin freestyles try and make the lines longer then you will sound better when yer rapping it outloud. holla

ya still new to the hole thing not just trying to get out what i can.

yo spit somthing right now yer best song you think youve ever made then ill tell you if its good ight

man...work on ure structure and flow...bring it together some...keep up tha good work

lyrikle dosent no shit

and he has a wack name yer shit need work you need wordplay in it some more and get soem punches in thur to then yer pimped