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08-06-04, 04:06 AM | #1 | ||||||
New to RB
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first time free styling
IP: 008C B14E
Just a redneck from the sticks
probally cant rap to save my dick but what the hell ill give it a try some of you think this is so bad i should just dye end my life cunt my self with a surgical knife nuttin really left to say thats it for today maybe later i can come out and play im going to bed wake up to the sound of the rhode island red and thats the end of this thread what ya think
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psychoecho " Im not god i swear to drunk" Nuttin like a juggalett after a hard days work INSANE CLOWN POSSE 4 LIFE |
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08-06-04, 04:30 AM | #2 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo dawg, work on yo wordplay, vocab, structure, and punches, jus keep practisin and ull elevate, iite dawg peep me n raw killa spittin da shit on our collabo, iite 1 love
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08-06-04, 09:14 AM | #3 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
that wasent bad for a freestyle that was really good lol you had flow but when yer makin freestyles try and make the lines longer then you will sound better when yer rapping it outloud. holla
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08-06-04, 07:42 PM | #4 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 5A24 3B9E
ya still new to the hole thing not just trying to get out what i can.
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08-07-04, 03:52 PM | #5 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo spit somthing right now yer best song you think youve ever made then ill tell you if its good ight
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08-07-04, 06:56 PM | #6 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 02C5 0D6C
man...work on ure structure and flow...bring it together some...keep up tha good work
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08-10-04, 11:06 AM | #7 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
lyrikle dosent no shit
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08-10-04, 11:07 AM | #8 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
and he has a wack name yer shit need work you need wordplay in it some more and get soem punches in thur to then yer pimped
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