stainless04 vs What-The-Fuck
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
20 posts to vote

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 02:34 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

What-The-Fuck has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:36 PM.

stainless04 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:40 PM.

stainless04 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:42 PM.

Look Little Niggia Aint No Fuckin Wit Me I Take Gaks And Put Ya Spleen Where Ya Stomach Should Be If U Think U Gonna Beat Me Use Out Of Luck You Have No Skills Whatsoever Dog And U Tryin To Stop Me What-the-fuck Im The Niggia Comin Up Behind U In The Mornin Ya Moms Be Wonderin Why She Cant Find U This Battle Rap Here Is The End Of You Dog You Goin Staight To Hell And Im Sendin U Dog I Aint Even Worried About The Verse U Wrightn Cause Its Proably Sumbodys Else Flow U Bitin U Aint No Where Close To Me And I Hope U Got Mad Skills Otherwise U Aint Rostin Me Goin Against Me Was A 1 Time Blunder U Now U 6 Feet Under

I will win this.. stainless40 won't,
when I'm done.. you will be screaming "don't"

No difficulty to win vs. a member of the DSA [downs-syndrome-association]
in addition Stainless40 is the only DSA that's gay!

with your lack of skills I'll smash you,
smash you into the migthy big blue

My flow and rhymes is the prime of rap
your flow and rhymes are full of crap

Now remember, never battle me again
cuz next time I'll fuck up your DSA brain

Stainless, rules was 10-12 lines!
Start the voting!!

uppin for votes, holla!
uppin for votes, holla!
!!!

uppin, huppin............................................ .. votes!!!

Voted For: stainless04

oh jesus i just know yall noobies right? n e ways stainless ur structure needs SERIOUS work why the hell u got a paragraph? and wtf.......wtf?! waz u playin or sumthin i hope just both of yall wasnt focused cuz this was a whack battle but because of better flow and punches i guess ill vote for stain but i almost dont want to vote. no hate just constructive criticism

i showed sum votin luv now show me sum but dont hate on minez just cuz i constructive criticized. link below...

Voted For: stainless04

stainless wins this bcuz he had better punches even tho they werent all that ur structure is a lil hurt tho...actually its hurt alot u need to break it up so its easier to tell where one bar starts n one bar ends nah mean?
what-the-fuck bars were pretty wack n basic he needs to elevate alot
holla at me
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This was feedback posted for What-The-Fuck
 

sorry ass battle.....ya';ll need to step it up....happy.....yo flow was ok a few lines that were dope(only for you caliber) ummmmmm happy......ok verse nothin to scream over.....what the fuck.....damn damn damn u just need to either stop rappin or elevate....cuz thats just.........happy won this in my eyes but i'll jus drop feed.........

!!1!!

This was feedback posted for stainless04
 

what the fuck you had good flow and wordplay but your punches were very weak and your disses were ok you had some good personals there.stainless horrible struture fix that your shit aint rhyme no punches or good disses at all and no wordplay or flow bad verse.
VOTE-WHATTHEFUCK
VOTE-

This was feedback posted for stainless04
 

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

to all post bad yo my structure was off so i do act the critizimsm
thanx foe votes even though i do not count this win
my future battles will be better
STAINLESS