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intensify effect 08-10-04 07:47 PM

U??
 
there's no way u can face me like i had a mask-on
put the blast-on, and keep pump'ing like im puting gas-on
thought i went soft on the last song,
but aint noting out-there tighter but my girls stash-toung
everyone all of a sudden wanna act-strong,
but i'll make ya eat the weed like a fucking bashed-bong
yea,
this is ya end N im cut'in the edge-off like razor galett
cuz when this sniper is in full-effect
the red-line i'll be show'in, like mis-take's in word-perfect
yea, the beef certine cuz the beast serface
its like a crash-dummy out-side the vehicle.... u defeat the purpose
u'r like a cheap adult-movie seller, cuz money ya dick is all u jerk'in
but keep work'ing, cuz ya life like a camaro to a lambo... a fast-one-im-merk'in
the key-to living is obaying me
or fellony thugs that serveing me
that'll make ya chin touch ya knees
and introduce u to the only reason why they reless *fagets only live in jail*
yea, my spits bless'in ya,
but its like face + jaw = chin-check'ing ya
u'r froggy and im disecting ya,
cuz the only tie u cum hard is when u erected-in-her

so now ask ya-self whos better???
U????
:laugh2: :gfy:
whatever....

{SociaL*ServeR} 08-10-04 08:34 PM

it was pretty good famo
i liked d multi's and flow

but i didnt get da subject

but dats how it iz on da radio and shit lol so it was pretty good

return da favor and vote on dis

slept on batle

jacktheripper24 08-10-04 08:57 PM

me?

intensify effect 08-10-04 08:58 PM

^^ yup!! u......

{SociaL*ServeR} 08-10-04 10:38 PM

yo iz u gonna return da favor? or not?

ArTiFaKt-wOrDz 08-11-04 12:08 AM

Flow Was Choppy .. When You Use Internals .. Don't Use The Same Word Twice(I.E.-On) .. Elevate .. On Multies And Fix Ya Structure .. Work On Vocab Too ..


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