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Old 08-10-04, 07:47 PM   #1
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U??

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there's no way u can face me like i had a mask-on
put the blast-on, and keep pump'ing like im puting gas-on
thought i went soft on the last song,
but aint noting out-there tighter but my girls stash-toung
everyone all of a sudden wanna act-strong,
but i'll make ya eat the weed like a fucking bashed-bong
yea,
this is ya end N im cut'in the edge-off like razor galett
cuz when this sniper is in full-effect
the red-line i'll be show'in, like mis-take's in word-perfect
yea, the beef certine cuz the beast serface
its like a crash-dummy out-side the vehicle.... u defeat the purpose
u'r like a cheap adult-movie seller, cuz money ya dick is all u jerk'in
but keep work'ing, cuz ya life like a camaro to a lambo... a fast-one-im-merk'in
the key-to living is obaying me
or fellony thugs that serveing me
that'll make ya chin touch ya knees
and introduce u to the only reason why they reless *fagets only live in jail*
yea, my spits bless'in ya,
but its like face + jaw = chin-check'ing ya
u'r froggy and im disecting ya,
cuz the only tie u cum hard is when u erected-in-her

so now ask ya-self whos better???
U????

whatever....
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Old 08-10-04, 08:34 PM   #2
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it was pretty good famo
i liked d multi's and flow

but i didnt get da subject

but dats how it iz on da radio and shit lol so it was pretty good

return da favor and vote on dis

slept on batle
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Old 08-10-04, 08:57 PM   #3
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Old 08-10-04, 08:58 PM   #4
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^^ yup!! u......
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Old 08-10-04, 10:38 PM   #5
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yo iz u gonna return da favor? or not?
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Old 08-11-04, 12:08 AM   #6
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Flow Was Choppy .. When You Use Internals .. Don't Use The Same Word Twice(I.E.-On) .. Elevate .. On Multies And Fix Ya Structure .. Work On Vocab Too ..
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