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* Stonez * vs <UZI>
Battle Rules:
6 - 10Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding i spit first Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-15-04 at 12:49 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
* Stonez * has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 12:04 PM.
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Yo u might think im whack but most likely im the best UZI? I Shake Salt on My Bulletz so they melt in ya Chest well dogg u Say u all dat but i got haters on hand And i got no Respect for u cuz u pretending to be a man Well i fuck u for real and get ya ass real Woozy And Shit dogg i Spray Faster then ur "<UZI>" |
Yo u might think im whack but most likely im the best UZI? I Shake Salt on My Bulletz so they melt in ya Chest well dogg u Say u all dat but i got haters on hand And i got no Respect for u cuz u pretending to be a man Well i fuck u for real and get ya ass real Woozy And Shit dogg i Spray Faster then ur "Uzi" |
<UzI> has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 12:29 PM.
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Stonez?Dis bitch gonna get stoned by my lyrical flowz,
Da only thing "Phat" about him is his stomach rolls,Runnin down backstreets-treated like a athlete- marathon-Fuck tha cemetary that dis nigga gets buried on, I leave u smoked like a crackhead on a mission, Dis pussy challengin me, My rhymez alone will force him in2 submission, Settin new rules fo' rappin-Its gonna b yo' face im slappin,Even if i popped a cap in yo mouth Bullshit b dribblin out even though yo lip flappin, So shut tha fuck up coz theres nobody clappin |
Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Voted For: &lt;UzI&gt;
aight dude first of all you pretty much had this in every category but you still need to elevate on structure and word play. i liked your verse a lot and his was just fuckin wack as hell so you get my vote hands down Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for &lt;UzI&gt;
Niether of these verses impressed me vey much, but UZI seemed to try and add some punchlines and flip some words while the other guys verse seemed to flow a little better to me UZI takes the win .
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Voted For: &lt;UzI&gt;
v/ <uzi>... had alot more personals.... flow was wack thhough.. structure was garbage too.... but stonez didnt appeal to me.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: &lt;UzI&gt;
what?!!! Yo u might think im whack but most likely im the best UZI? I Shake Salt on My Bulletz so they melt in ya Chest wack opener... what's salty bullets got to do with an uzi?...no connection well dogg u Say u all dat but i got haters on hand And i got no Respect for u cuz u pretending to be a man garbage filler line... shoulda deleted it Well i fuck u for real and get ya ass real Woozy And Shit dogg i Spray Faster then ur "" Gay closer?... wtf dude! no metas, multi's, wordplay, punches, or personals Stonez?Dis bitch gonna get stoned by my lyrical flowz, Da only thing "Phat" about him is his stomach rolls ehh... not feeling the opener ,Runnin down backstreets-treated like a athlete- marathon- Fuck tha cemetary that dis nigga gets buried on, ehh again... no punch I leave u smoked like a crackhead on a mission, Dis pussy challengin me, My rhymez alone will force him in2 submission, shoulda came with a better second line... ok i guess... no real punch ..mission/submission...blah Settin new rules fo' rappin-Its gonna b yo' face im slappin, Even if i popped a cap in yo mouth Bullshit b dribblin out even though yo lip flappin, stretched line... little multi usage... no concept of conceptuality..get a clue... little bit of a punch though..well, love tap So shut tha fuck up coz theres nobody clappin and this line goes with ....what? boring battle but uzi had a slightly better verse... check the merkings in my sig...lol...one of 'em is mine...lol |
Voted For: * Stonez *
lol i have to give it to Stonez...u both had a PRETTY good drop! Stonez word play was just a lil better though! UZI, i still have love for ya man! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for &lt;UzI&gt;
you even bit a line in this one, thats 3 times i caught you biting dickhead..........................you will be banned
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He Bit
i knew a Real verse chouldint be that good by us newbies |
Voted For: * Stonez *
tsk tsk tsk we have a biter yep uzi bit in my battle but your ryhmes are better i liked the rhyme scheme , jus cant trust uzi's shit but nice one Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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