Battle Rules:

6 - 10Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

i spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 12:49 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

* Stonez * has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 12:04 PM.

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Yo u might think im whack but most likely im the best
UZI? I Shake Salt on My Bulletz so they melt in ya Chest
well dogg u Say u all dat but i got haters on hand
And i got no Respect for u cuz u pretending to be a man
Well i fuck u for real and get ya ass real Woozy
And Shit dogg i Spray Faster then ur "<UZI>"

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Original .A.B.

"Its The Definition"

... Open . . Battles ...
VS Wisdom 2-1 ME

VS Cannabars 1-3 HIM

VS Skriptz 0-2 HIM


The RV. Takeover Is Around The Corner
Record
5-2

&lt;UzI&gt; has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 12:29 PM.

Stonez?Dis bitch gonna get stoned by my lyrical flowz,
Da only thing "Phat" about him is his stomach rolls,Runnin down backstreets-treated like a athlete-
marathon-Fuck tha cemetary that dis nigga gets buried on,
I leave u smoked like a crackhead on a mission,
Dis pussy challengin me, My rhymez alone will force him in2 submission,
Settin new rules fo' rappin-Its gonna b yo' face im slappin,Even if i popped a cap in yo mouth Bullshit b dribblin out even though yo lip flappin,
So shut tha fuck up coz theres nobody clappin

Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: &amp;lt;UzI&amp;gt;

aight dude first of all you pretty much had this in every category but you still need to elevate on structure and word play. i liked your verse a lot and his was just fuckin wack as hell so you get my vote hands down

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16 KOs 19 WINS

Niether of these verses impressed me vey much, but UZI seemed to try and add some punchlines and flip some words while the other guys verse seemed to flow a little better to me UZI takes the win .

Voted For: &amp;lt;UzI&amp;gt;

v/ <uzi>... had alot more personals.... flow was wack thhough.. structure was garbage too.... but stonez didnt appeal to me..

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Voted For: &amp;lt;UzI&amp;gt;

what?!!!

Yo u might think im whack but most likely im the best
UZI? I Shake Salt on My Bulletz so they melt in ya Chest

wack opener... what's salty bullets got to do with an uzi?...no connection

well dogg u Say u all dat but i got haters on hand
And i got no Respect for u cuz u pretending to be a man

garbage filler line... shoulda deleted it

Well i fuck u for real and get ya ass real Woozy
And Shit dogg i Spray Faster then ur ""

Gay closer?... wtf dude! no metas, multi's, wordplay, punches, or personals

Stonez?Dis bitch gonna get stoned by my lyrical flowz,
Da only thing "Phat" about him is his stomach rolls

ehh... not feeling the opener

,Runnin down backstreets-treated like a athlete-
marathon-
Fuck tha cemetary that dis nigga gets buried on,

ehh again... no punch

I leave u smoked like a crackhead on a mission,
Dis pussy challengin me, My rhymez alone will force him in2 submission,

shoulda came with a better second line... ok i guess... no real punch ..mission/submission...blah

Settin new rules fo' rappin-Its gonna b yo' face im slappin,
Even if i popped a cap in yo mouth Bullshit b dribblin out even though yo lip flappin,

stretched line... little multi usage... no concept of conceptuality..get a clue... little bit of a punch though..well, love tap

So shut tha fuck up coz theres nobody clappin

and this line goes with ....what?

boring battle but uzi had a slightly better verse...
check the merkings in my sig...lol...one of 'em is mine...lol

Voted For: * Stonez *

lol i have to give it to Stonez...u both had a PRETTY good drop! Stonez word play was just a lil better though! UZI, i still have love for ya man!

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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)

you even bit a line in this one, thats 3 times i caught you biting dickhead..........................you will be banned

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i knew a Real verse chouldint be that good by us newbies

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Original .A.B.

"Its The Definition"

... Open . . Battles ...
VS Wisdom 2-1 ME

VS Cannabars 1-3 HIM

VS Skriptz 0-2 HIM


The RV. Takeover Is Around The Corner
Record
5-2