intensify effect vs Maku JaiiLiin
 

Battle Rules:

2line punch battle
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no h8 votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:01 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:04 PM.

I’m forever elevated above you, who’s truly a flaw//
so even in death i'm held up like breasts in a funeral bra//

u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length
N
rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt develop u'r punches with extra strength/

u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length
N
rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt help u'r punches hit with extra strength/

sorry for that.... i put it in 2 different places haha......

i tryed to rush it at the last min......

u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length
N
rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt develop u'r punches with extra strength/

^^^ dont judge this one....



u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length
N
rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt help u'r punches hit with extra strength

^^ thats the one to vote on.........

Voted For: intensify effect

Vote- Intensify Effect, Harder Punch, Maku Had Good Metaphor But This A P-line Battle So I Vote Intensify Harder Punch, Though Maku's Was More Original, Both Flowed Ok But Intensify Gets The Vote Stronger Punch

Vote- I.E

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

I Like Maku's Shit Better..

Just Stuck Out With More Creativity To Me and Hit Harder..

No Hate Just Honest.

Vote - Maku

~R~

Voted For: intensify effect

Maku JaiiLin
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is good.. no multis.. wordplay is a little simple.. no punch..

intensity effect
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. ur second line is stretched.. no multis.. wordplay is ok.. punch connected a little..

Overall
Maku JaiiLin had the better structure.. both had ok wordplay.. neither had multis.. intensity effect's punch connected a little more.. and basing off that this is a punchline battle.. intensity effect gets my vote for at least havin a punch..

VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECT

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. Thanx..

the difference between me and the average rapverse 'netcee' is that i vote based on verses i see, not on if the guy voted for me or against me. If i felt disrespected...

i'd rather just battle you.

thanks for the input. Uppin this battle!! lets get it.

Voted For: intensify effect

Cool battle...both had some okay wordplay...Maku came less stretched...which really helped him...his was clever...but wasnt a punch....it was more self glorification...so intensity takes it with a harder punch and goin straight at him...

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thanks for votes.......

drop link i will return the favor......

upp'in to end this....

Voted For: intensify effect

Intensify takes this. Both werent really hard punches. Didnt even think they were punches at all. But intensify takes this with a better punch. Makus was kinda weak cuz it dint make much sense. I got it and everything...but the second part of your first line (whos truly a flaw) didnt make much sense in the punchline. Intensify gets it.

Vote-Intensify

Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143537