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5 | 83.33% |
| Maku JaiiLiin |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
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08-17-04, 06:00 PM
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atlas the vagabond
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intensify effect vs Maku JaiiLiin
IP: 3E7F 0790
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2line punch battle No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no h8 votes Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-17-04 at 06:30 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
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08-17-04, 06:01 PM
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IP: 3E7F 0790
Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:01 PM.
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08-17-04, 06:04 PM
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IP: 20B5 2D66
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:04 PM.
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08-17-04, 06:05 PM
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atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
I’m forever elevated above you, who’s truly a flaw//
so even in death i'm held up like breasts in a funeral bra// |
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08-17-04, 06:24 PM
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length
N rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt develop u'r punches with extra strength/ |
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08-17-04, 06:25 PM
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#6
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length
N rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt help u'r punches hit with extra strength/ |
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08-17-04, 06:28 PM
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#7
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
sorry for that.... i put it in 2 different places haha......
i tryed to rush it at the last min...... |
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08-17-04, 06:29 PM
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#8
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length
N rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt develop u'r punches with extra strength/ ^^^ dont judge this one.... u'r like a midget boxing, cuz u'r swings lacked the length N rub'ing Tylenol on arm's couldnt help u'r punches hit with extra strength ^^ thats the one to vote on......... |
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08-17-04, 07:03 PM
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IP: 59B3 099F
Voted For: intensify effect
Vote- Intensify Effect, Harder Punch, Maku Had Good Metaphor But This A P-line Battle So I Vote Intensify Harder Punch, Though Maku's Was More Original, Both Flowed Ok But Intensify Gets The Vote Stronger Punch Vote- I.E
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08-17-04, 08:11 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
I Like Maku's Shit Better.. Just Stuck Out With More Creativity To Me and Hit Harder.. No Hate Just Honest. Vote - Maku ~R~ |
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08-17-04, 08:20 PM
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IP: 0122 54B5
Voted For: intensify effect
Maku JaiiLin dont put the //s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is good.. no multis.. wordplay is a little simple.. no punch.. intensity effect dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. ur second line is stretched.. no multis.. wordplay is ok.. punch connected a little.. Overall Maku JaiiLin had the better structure.. both had ok wordplay.. neither had multis.. intensity effect's punch connected a little more.. and basing off that this is a punchline battle.. intensity effect gets my vote for at least havin a punch.. VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECT Please return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. Thanx.. |
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08-18-04, 06:29 PM
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atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
the difference between me and the average rapverse 'netcee' is that i vote based on verses i see, not on if the guy voted for me or against me. If i felt disrespected...
i'd rather just battle you. thanks for the input. Uppin this battle!! lets get it. |
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08-18-04, 09:13 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: intensify effect
Cool battle...both had some okay wordplay...Maku came less stretched...which really helped him...his was clever...but wasnt a punch....it was more self glorification...so intensity takes it with a harder punch and goin straight at him... Hit this up please...Get EFL More Active... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1508744
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08-19-04, 09:08 PM
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
thanks for votes.......
drop link i will return the favor...... upp'in to end this.... |
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08-20-04, 08:53 PM
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Peace....for now
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IP: 12C8 6E9D
Voted For: intensify effect
Intensify takes this. Both werent really hard punches. Didnt even think they were punches at all. But intensify takes this with a better punch. Makus was kinda weak cuz it dint make much sense. I got it and everything...but the second part of your first line (whos truly a flaw) didnt make much sense in the punchline. Intensify gets it. Vote-Intensify Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143537
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