MR. ZACHY DOOM vs SLicK~SKiLLz
 

Battle Rules:

5-15
No Crew Votes.hate.dr
No Recycling
No Biting,feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 04:27 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 03:57 AM.

ayo lets go!

mr.zachy doom dont u know ill give u a brain toom-er
got ya dome all mixed like a maze
got u loosin dayz off ya life i keep threatin u with a knife
sayin ill stealth up on your back side
comin harder then the tide of a hurricane
as my ryme drillz ur ass got u back to doin cocaine dealz
and quitin rap battles merkin this bitch so much he might tattle
my flows are iller then a drug dealer givin pillers of cocaine rocks
kickin ur ass and makin fun of ur group the gay jocks
im typin with socks on my hands i got a warrent for my arrest
for givin u sick flowes to ya chest i got arrest-ed just member im the 1 who wast-ed u

MR. ZACHY DOOM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 04:10 AM.

I beg your pardon sir,
I've yet to see your skills,
So now I guess it's time,
To show us what you will,
I swear I won't make judgements,
Even though you probably suck,
But whatever, dude,
You're just 15
And "just don't give a fuck."
Your parents probably wonder,
Well, if they're still around,
But I bet you're just a white kid
Who think's he's black and "down."
But back to what I was saying,
Your parents think you're weird,
A white, suburban kid
Who likes drugs and drinks beer.
Actually, you probably don't
You probably sit at home
And play on your computer
Stiff, like a garden gnome.
I have no idea
Where I'm going with this rap
So I guess it's time to "wrap" it up
And end this stupid crap.

gay. this was more of a shitty poem.

eh...u went way pass 15 but w/e uppin for votes uppin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~```

This was feedback posted for SLicK~SKiLLz
 

hahahhaa you both suck set up and i'll battle you either one of you

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

BOTH OF YALL VERSES WAS WACK THEY BARLEY RHYMED IT WAS SHITTY BUT SLICK HIT MZD WIT HARDER PUNCHES WEAK FLOW,STRUCTURE YALL BOTH NEED 2 ELIVATE A WHOLE LOT

Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM

ok everyone had sumtin wrong and sumtin good about them

(B)MR(/B):
good: better punches overall and nice flow
bad: bad structure semmed streched

(B) S.S. (/B)
good: structure and flow
bad:didnt rhyme and horible punches

^that is explained*

vote/MR

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144192

return the favor-no hate votes plzzz

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

skills won this shit...

Mr.zachy doom elevate dawg...

flow=skillz
structure=skillz
punches=neither


best line for slick



my flows are iller then a drug dealer givin pillers of cocaine rocks
kickin ur ass and makin fun of ur group the gay jocks


zachy doom= none..

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

man click took this 100%
slick-
nice puches 8/10
good stukture 7/10
nice verse 7/10-overall
ha ha ha mr.
NO puches 1/10
stuture 3/10
WEAK AS FUCK 1/10-overall
plz return da fav on my battle with yvonne in my sig

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

MR. Zachy had sum personals with the "thinks he's black and thinks he's down line".. not too bad, but M.Z.D. your flow was way too simple.. it rhymed so it coulda been a good flow if it had quality but it seemed like a poem, just like the end of your verse.. it shoulda stayed in poetic scriptures.. you didn't deliver any punches.. just two personals... and S.S. you verse wasn't bad.. you had a few downfalss like the separation of words like wasted, you don't need to put dashes between words that complete a multis but overall you had the better flow.. vocab was lil betta than M.Z.D... and your had delivered sum decent punches.. so you get the vote.. no hate either, just simple truth..
~wun~