Poet vs ShackleS
 

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Check in by: 08-18-04 at 11:02 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

hours rofl..... *typo

I meant minutes...........

ShackleS has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 10:54 AM.

Poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 10:55 AM.

word....aiight, rippin this 'nobody' MC thats commin against me..

Its fact, that this love 'shack' aint meant to be hard.. hes lyrically mad wack..
generically bad n off track.. cat's like cards.... but hes short 51 in the pack..(stupid)
son.. your 'less' then good rap..u cant cope..n usin ~ symbols dont make ya dope..
too fuken simple..take note..this fagget newb'll be hung.. n poets here to 'show him the rope'..
like the pope.. your shits old n played.. but i admit..your a 'G'..*cough* as in 'gay'..
pics of pac n 50 with no shirt.. we know ya games.. u wishin u in that pic like a 4way..
fuken homo.. ya words me laugh.. diff is ya verse that i peeped..it makes me wanna sleep..
these....fakes be on the creep.. fuck this bitch MC.. 1-2..here, take another L from me..
ya failin please.. 1-3 is ya new shit.. ya teeth rattles in these shit battles..
i cant do a good personal... wait, yeh i can-> "who the fuck is this kid shackles?"

aiight quick explenations cuz im runnin outta time..
show you the rope(s) <-like sayin ill skool you
admit your a G = G-unit is why i said that.. (fiddy in his sig)
his recs 1-2
"who the fuck is this kid shackles" <- sayin hes nobody...

aiight vote bitches........

~Callin his mum a hoe he'd say it was tha truth~
~I'd drop a ingenius verse but i dun wanna get you to confused~
~Droppin rhymes that you'd think were riddles~
~Askin you to compete is a bit too much guys gettin played like a fiddle~

~Poet writin nursery ryhmes fo little school kids~
~Flows like a mountain punches WROTE BY FLIDS~ comin up short

~iMMA GIVE THIS GUY A BRAKE LET THIS GUY OFF~
~lIKE BUTTER AND WET CAKE GUYS GONE SOFT~

Lmao off good verse had to write mine quick didn't realis you set it for ten mins.............wrote that shyt in like 5 mins....................thnks for tha loss

aiight.. its all good... i came pretty wack on this one..

fuken writers block, but anyway, gluck with the votes n lets get this thing finished.

5 minutes? it said on mine there was like 3 minutes to go when i dropped. i thought i was about to miss it. oh well..

Yo wrote that in 3 mins shuddup man......lol.....well it was still a way better drop than mine.............

11:10 the verses needed to be in
11:07 is when i dropped..

and you dropped like 20 seconds after me.......but ay enough of the small talk lets get votes............................

uppin...............................
drop links when your done voting.....

Voted For: Poet

lmao...poet killed you man... he had the punch, the vocab, basicly everything...

Shackles...work on first writting as much lines as u can..cuz ur verse was to short..neone coulda beat'n u... also try to get personals or jst stronger punches...

vote: poet

return the vote honestly
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142217

This was feedback posted for Poet
 

yo poet..im sinister... can u just vote in dis battle instead...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143261

thanx

no probs man..

uppin for more votes to finish this.