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Banker 08-19-04 04:34 AM

This feeling Inside
 
Wut im feeling right now:

This feeling came back agen, I just don't really understand it...
Its wierd, i dont think it feels like luv? but inside its expandin..
This feeling it doesn't hurt, not even sure if it feels good....
But i feel I need to let go of something, dat i know i should...
This girl, my best friend it seems like i knew her forever...
Damn, u have no idea i want her n i to be close together...
But the chance of that happening, damn its pretty low...
But my luv for her won't stop, it just continues to grow...
Right now I don't know, I just wanna let go and let loose..
If i could only choose who to luv, then yes her i'd choose..
But once again I can't show it, im here writtin with tears...
I think I luv sumwun i knew for 5 months but feels like years..
I guess dats the reason i ain't hungry, the reason i lost wieght..
But like everyone im lonely, but she's wut makes mah life great..
I finally know, I ain't confused, I know wut to do for once..
Imma show her how i feel after i hid it all of these months...
I thank the Lord above for finally showing me the right way..
I guess thats wut happens after every night I alway pray...
Yes tomorrow imma tell her, just as soon as i see her...
Im gonna say, "babe, I luv u, wen i don't see u i get weaker..
When im sick you help me get well and get better...
Your who I need, your an angel, your mah treasure....

Hey guys, this is really how i feel, this is true, i just wrote this 10-20 minutes ago, and tomorrow, imma really do it.. plz feed back.. and plz no beef..

Mad Dog 08-19-04 05:20 AM

Dawg that was a tight spit the structure was decent and even flow was hott nice word usage and in my opinion go for it dawg good luck :thumbup:

Drop sum feedback on my open mic in ma sig or Drama jus hit my find more posts :thumbup:

.:Blaid`e'ums:. 08-19-04 05:52 AM

ya man that was dope shit 7/10 keep it up i like yer shit

HoPe 08-19-04 01:52 PM

hahahaha, nyce

101-Chronic-101 08-19-04 01:57 PM

good shit man 7/10 i liked it

101-Chronic-101 08-19-04 01:58 PM

lol my names dope

KOOL COL-B 08-20-04 01:03 PM

ayo essay, nice ryme. so, if u put that yesterday, then that must mean u told her 2day, or ur goin 2, good luck wif that holmes. oh yeah, nice shit ....man, *ahem*, yeah, 8/10. holla atcha boy homey!! wigity wigity wigity WERD!!

Nynth Degree 08-20-04 03:52 PM

Yo man that was some good shit, nice flow and vocab usage, i was feelin' it. Holla back on one of my joints...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138884


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