This feeling Inside
Wut im feeling right now:
This feeling came back agen, I just don't really understand it... Its wierd, i dont think it feels like luv? but inside its expandin.. This feeling it doesn't hurt, not even sure if it feels good.... But i feel I need to let go of something, dat i know i should... This girl, my best friend it seems like i knew her forever... Damn, u have no idea i want her n i to be close together... But the chance of that happening, damn its pretty low... But my luv for her won't stop, it just continues to grow... Right now I don't know, I just wanna let go and let loose.. If i could only choose who to luv, then yes her i'd choose.. But once again I can't show it, im here writtin with tears... I think I luv sumwun i knew for 5 months but feels like years.. I guess dats the reason i ain't hungry, the reason i lost wieght.. But like everyone im lonely, but she's wut makes mah life great.. I finally know, I ain't confused, I know wut to do for once.. Imma show her how i feel after i hid it all of these months... I thank the Lord above for finally showing me the right way.. I guess thats wut happens after every night I alway pray... Yes tomorrow imma tell her, just as soon as i see her... Im gonna say, "babe, I luv u, wen i don't see u i get weaker.. When im sick you help me get well and get better... Your who I need, your an angel, your mah treasure.... Hey guys, this is really how i feel, this is true, i just wrote this 10-20 minutes ago, and tomorrow, imma really do it.. plz feed back.. and plz no beef.. |
Dawg that was a tight spit the structure was decent and even flow was hott nice word usage and in my opinion go for it dawg good luck :thumbup:
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ya man that was dope shit 7/10 keep it up i like yer shit
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hahahaha, nyce
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good shit man 7/10 i liked it
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lol my names dope
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ayo essay, nice ryme. so, if u put that yesterday, then that must mean u told her 2day, or ur goin 2, good luck wif that holmes. oh yeah, nice shit ....man, *ahem*, yeah, 8/10. holla atcha boy homey!! wigity wigity wigity WERD!!
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Yo man that was some good shit, nice flow and vocab usage, i was feelin' it. Holla back on one of my joints...
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