String9487 vs TURBAN
 

Battle Rules:

5-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 25

Check in by: 08-21-04 at 06:39 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

TURBAN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 06:10 PM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 06:12 PM.

wanna come around talkin all smack,well your jus a lil wanna be with a big mouth and shitty come backs/

i'm bout to finsh this no strings attached, jus like paul bunyan i'll lay down this axe/

you you cant take this , pretty soon like joan rivers your gonna need a face lift/

call me th puppet master,cuz i got u on strings ,like a stick shift versus a automatic i'm jus what wins/

this is no contest, i go out to eat and this is what a get? a few quick disses and a couple of tidbits?/

your to easy to predict, i've sentenced you , capital punishment, so we'll jus finish it/

i'ma come in your house and silence this piece of shit before he can even try to ruin it by trying to spit/

cuz your rhyme style just dont matta, me i'm cujo and i jus got rabid, rip ya throat out and watch you bleed/

your never ending story just ended with me,i've commended your acts of stupidty now thats this is done i'ma go watch some tv/

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!!

ima merk this nigga wit no compassion, ya beat
Turban fuck wit me, have more than ya head wrapped in a sheet
i aint the one u wanna test, if u bet i'll blow
have dis nigga catchin mo slugs than Escartgo
so dont try n step to me like u bang man
i'll toss ya body in a "gravel pit" like the Wu-Tang clan
why try an battle me? its a damn shame amateur
u couldnt get votes if u had a campaign manager
damn , ur exposed, yall heard em? hes wack
its only took half a bar for me to murda this cat.. HAAAAA



*Escartgo*- french cusine

umm dog u went way over the line limit, why didnt u just say u wanted to do more bars? n i woulda changed it.

Voted For: String9487

YO TURBAN NICE MAYNE YO PUNCHES WAS PLAYED U HAD GOOD FLOW AND STRUTURE BUT YO PUNCHES WAS JUST PLAYED AND SIMPLE//

STRING U HAD GOOD FLOW AND PUNCHES NICE MAYNE

~PEACE~

Voted For: String9487

string had better stucture first off, after that his rhymes were also better, much better wordplay, his punches also hit harder, turban said some shit that i said also to strings in a battle, the no strings attached thing, so it's played now.. also string just simply had more content, so you get this string..

return favor with a drop in mines cuz, heres the link.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143487

Voted For: String9487

Turban-your bars were really stretched... Im not really feelin the long bars unless tthe first one was short and none of yours were.. Also don't space out your bars... Not really any punches at all.. So you really need to work on everything..

String-All in all you beat him... Punches hit hard since he really didn't have any at all, I liked the wrapped in a sheet punch the best, But i don't know what else to say besides you won...

Vote-String

Voted For: String9487

why try an battle me? its a damn shame amateur
u couldnt get votes if u had a campaign manager

i aint the one u wanna test, if u bet i'll blow
have dis nigga catchin mo slugs than Escartgo

Those won the battle for you...the othr dude had weak punches i liked really..he had no personals...his bars were superstretched...he had punches that were worded bad...so
u get the vote.

Voted For: String9487

String: Erm... welll... fairly average verse here strung with some decent punches. I didn't count any personals in there...though I'd have to say the bar bout Escarto was prolly the best in the battle. Good solid flow as well... though if I battled him I'd say something bout the taliban or sommat coz he's called Turban, or the fact he'd only got bout 4/5 people in his crew.

TURAN: I wasn't feeling your verse to be honest, I made a vow to put punces over flow and layout but I wasn't feeling your punches either. In fact all the punches where damn weak, I'm sick of people ryhming lines within themselves and spitting down a load of shit that could be aimed at anybody, hit with personals. They hit much harder than random lines that could be aimed at anyone. Plus the vocab could be inprved a little... but I say punches oevr vocab as well but seeing as you did't really have either...

V/ String for having better punches and more understandble ryhmes. Also having better flow.

TURBAN: