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Ill Keysryle
ayo
we gonna do BIG like MAC(s) from MCdonalds but we just be 'clowin' around like 'Ronald WORDPLAYA cuz da way i 'play on words' kno why cuz there was sentences on my playground .............................curves............... ................ can u believe i can't dats why i fell so RECkless no wonder i take down buildings when i play my RECords so JUMP 2 get da "beat" dawg when my shit start or i'll chase u win as noose so u'll JUMP rope 4 "heart" don't really want 2 go on but dawg a need post not from da office dawg dats not wut i wrote see dawg im smooth as 'butter' n my rhymes 'soar' high but unlike 'Ashton Kutcher' u won't 'Effect' diss 'Butterfly' |
not a bad drop work a little bit on ya flow....
preety slick with ya lines but come more creative u feel me.... last bar i thought was the best in this piece.... 7.0 outta 10 peep my drop N give me feed back.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144597 |
thanx uppin 4 more feedbak ya
so cum on don't matter how u feel bout it |
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