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Old 08-23-04, 09:02 PM   #1
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Post Ill Keysryle

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ayo
we gonna do BIG like MAC(s) from MCdonalds
but we just be 'clowin' around like 'Ronald
WORDPLAYA cuz da way i 'play on words'
kno why cuz there was sentences on my playground
.............................curves............... ................
can u believe i can't dats why i fell so RECkless
no wonder i take down buildings when i play my RECords
so JUMP 2 get da "beat" dawg when my shit start
or i'll chase u win as noose so u'll JUMP rope 4 "heart"
don't really want 2 go on but dawg a need post
not from da office dawg dats not wut i wrote
see dawg im smooth as 'butter' n my rhymes 'soar' high
but unlike 'Ashton Kutcher' u won't 'Effect' diss 'Butterfly'
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Old 08-23-04, 09:27 PM   #2
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not a bad drop work a little bit on ya flow....
preety slick with ya lines but come more creative u feel me....
last bar i thought was the best in this piece....

7.0 outta 10

peep my drop N give me feed back....

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Old 08-23-04, 09:55 PM   #3
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thanx uppin 4 more feedbak ya
so cum on don't matter how u feel
bout it
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