Yvonne vs bLiNkZ
 

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Check in by: 09-05-04 at 05:28 AM

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Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 05:29 AM.

bLiNkZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 05:30 AM.

our plots stopped...beat me...i got more wins than this verse has got dots/
im top notch... and the only time you spit something explosive is pop-rocks/
i bruise bars and shoot stars ya egos the only thing thats too large/
you defeatin me is impossible like fitting 10 fat bitches in 2 cars/
your commiting rap suicide like your words slit your wrists/
ill put a .22 to ya chest like you were fuckin emmitt smith/
or ill cut up your body into sections and mail the pieces to ya boyfreind/
nigga play role Yvonne is a gay hoe when i say so ima watch her lay cold/
cause she's so set for failure her verse should read 1..2..3..4..5..K.O/
call this hide an seek..when i apply the beat..you run and hide from me/
you should buy a guide for emcee's before you decide to speak/
i got skills to impress with words like drills to ya chest/
imma checkmate this battle like i was a king in chess/
im winnin no doubt..the thought of you takin-me-out has me raisin-my-brow/
i mean damn clown...it must be 6:30 cuz i just beat you hands-down/
so just keep quiet you don’t wanna see when a bar sparks/
cuz im bout to dissasemble ya ass real fast like car parts/
stop bitchin..like chefs stuffin chicken you always got your arm on cocks/
ya dead rhymes wont make head lines like white boyz in a barber shop/
Yvonne dont even try it...ur flow's are like a one man fuckin riot/

i took a look at ur pic and i swear u look just like a monkey
u'ld never fuck a gurl right,cos i saw ur dick was clunky
you still new to the site,the only way u gon win is if u ryde
you'ld never reach my hieght,cos i c u as a dog dat cant bite
the only way you'ld dunk in a bball game,is if u gave ur head*
cos with that body you wouldnt give a BITCH head on the bed
if u"wannabe" an ill mc that spit hotness,i lend u my dopness
cos u a newb and the only thing u gon show up is ur wackness
I package my punches like sandwitches..ready to feed hungry bitches,as u said u were hungry,i just gave a lil for some quick munches



* his head would be the ball...to dunk...

peace

duh


uppin

Voted For: bLiNkZ

Aiight, this one goes to Blinkz for more consistant disses, a more complex verse and although there were a few bars that didnt rhyme line to line, the flow was generally better..

Yvonne, I dont think youve ever seen him before, so the top few of your bars didnt make much sense. Best advice i can give you when using personals, is to research your oponent and find out things theyve done on the net.. Looks is something you can only really write disses about if the other person has posted their pic in the members mugshots...

keep elevating both of yas..

Vote- Blinkz

Voted For: bLiNkZ

average battle... heres wat i gots 2 say

Yvonne~not really feelin ur flow... your punches were weak and some of it didnt even rhyme... your structure wasnt the best and you had sort of a personal~tip:use all the lines~4.5/10
Blinkz~decent flow alltogether... your lines were a little bit stretched but it still flowed pretty well... your punches hit harder~tip:use personals and do sumtin wit ur structure~7.5/10

vote/blinkz

This was feedback posted for bLiNkZ
 

our plots stopped...beat me...i got more wins than this verse has got dots/
im top notch... and the only time you spit something explosive is pop-rocks/

nice intro.
Structure was well, punches were ok, nice personals and vocab, the intro was better than every line afterwords.
some verses were weak like the ending. it was all good

lol, Yvonne some of ya verses didn't make sence, like

"i took a look at ur pic and i swear u look just like a monkey
u'ld never fuck a gurl right,cos i saw ur dick was clunky"

That's some funny shit... but u had alright flow,and some funny but wtf personals, simple vocab .. u need alot of elavation i see some potiental..

Voted For: bLiNkZ

Aight.....................
Blinkz In My Opinnon Killed It.......
Much Better WordPlay n Punches...
A Few Nice Metas Too.....

Yvonne, Ya Need'a Up Your Vocab...
Elevate n Use Humour In Ya Lines...

Nice Battle Ya';ll.....
Good Lookin n Keep Doin Ya Thang!

P E A C E

Voted For: bLiNkZ

vote Blinks

ha nice battle ::clap::::

but blinks had e goin OOOOOOOO 4 real

he had wordplay that was crazy as hell
and punches were good too
only thing lacking is persoanls
but i understand u had nuthin to work with
but Yvonne had a easy ass personals to work with
so its no excuse for that

vote/blinks

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144192

return the favor- NO HATE votes plzzzzzzz

Voted For: bLiNkZ

bLiNkZ gets my vote cuz...tha punches were harder...tha structure was a little stretched out but ok...and tha flow was pretty decent..

Yvonne yo punches could've been a littler harder and you prolly would've tookin this match...but bLiNkZ won this cuz his punches were hard & connected...