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Eclipsik 09-08-04 07:17 PM

My distant future(poem)
 
In the distance, I see my ideal existence
My wish list fulfilled, though not in instance
And most certainly not by accident

I’m the G.W.O.A.T.: Greatest Writer Of All Time
A shining light in the eyes of writing idols
Possessing lasting mass appeal
But I find myself even hungrier after that last meal
Eager to set sights higher
Satisfy new desire
Learn a new skill
Time to spin the wheel

What shall be my next endeavor?
Well, I always wanted to play the piano…
Catch me at the Rialto or House of Blues
Nailing “Moonlight Sonata” or any song I choose
Able to compose a masterpiece at will
Receiving Nobel Prizes for my wonderful skill

Maybe I can learn a martial art
Don’t matter which one, I just want to start
I’ll get a sensei to push me everyday
Then join the leagues to battle championship tastes

No need to prance like I can: I got two left feet
They meet so much on the dance floor than they should
Somebody need to teach me to dance
Many styles I want to give a chance
(It won’t be easy though. All I have is a two-step)

Maybe I should turn my life over to God
Let him decide what’s next for me to do

Feels good to lead a life of freedom
It became mine from busting my behind over the years
Blood, sweat and tears
Bled, dropped and shed for my personal cause

G_$peed 09-08-04 07:42 PM

nice man keep it up...

Eclipsik 09-08-04 11:40 PM

Thanks. We need to make the poetry forum more active somehow.

G_$peed 09-08-04 11:41 PM

i agree...

Eclipsik 09-12-04 02:43 PM

uppity

fluidmoon 09-12-04 02:54 PM

wow, very positive poem, nice flow as well, and the words you used,damn, this seems like a confidence piece, and it has its own style, cus its all about you, i liked it a lot, keep dropping man..............1

Eclipsik 09-13-04 01:05 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by fluidmoon
wow, very positive poem, nice flow as well, and the words you used,damn, this seems like a confidence piece, and it has its own style, cus its all about you, i liked it a lot, keep dropping man..............1
Thanks man. This poem simply describes how I want to eventually live my life

Eclipsik 09-18-04 07:39 PM

up once again


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