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09-08-04, 07:17 PM | #1 | ||||||
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My distant future(poem)
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In the distance, I see my ideal existence
My wish list fulfilled, though not in instance And most certainly not by accident I’m the G.W.O.A.T.: Greatest Writer Of All Time A shining light in the eyes of writing idols Possessing lasting mass appeal But I find myself even hungrier after that last meal Eager to set sights higher Satisfy new desire Learn a new skill Time to spin the wheel What shall be my next endeavor? Well, I always wanted to play the piano… Catch me at the Rialto or House of Blues Nailing “Moonlight Sonata” or any song I choose Able to compose a masterpiece at will Receiving Nobel Prizes for my wonderful skill Maybe I can learn a martial art Don’t matter which one, I just want to start I’ll get a sensei to push me everyday Then join the leagues to battle championship tastes No need to prance like I can: I got two left feet They meet so much on the dance floor than they should Somebody need to teach me to dance Many styles I want to give a chance (It won’t be easy though. All I have is a two-step) Maybe I should turn my life over to God Let him decide what’s next for me to do Feels good to lead a life of freedom It became mine from busting my behind over the years Blood, sweat and tears Bled, dropped and shed for my personal cause |
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09-08-04, 07:42 PM | #2 | ||||
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nice man keep it up...
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09-08-04, 11:40 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Thanks. We need to make the poetry forum more active somehow.
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09-08-04, 11:41 PM | #4 | ||||
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i agree...
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09-12-04, 02:43 PM | #5 | ||||||
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uppity
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09-12-04, 02:54 PM | #6 | |||||
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wow, very positive poem, nice flow as well, and the words you used,damn, this seems like a confidence piece, and it has its own style, cus its all about you, i liked it a lot, keep dropping man..............1
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09-13-04, 01:05 AM | #7 | |||||||
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09-18-04, 07:39 PM | #8 | ||||||
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up once again
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