she doesn't understand
 

she doesn't understand
how much i need her
back in my life
i can't go just bein best friends
i lover her more than that
and i gotta let her know
can't do it anymore
can't keep my emotions inside
no longer keep em bottled up
gotta let em all out
i need you so much
i want you back in my life
i love you girl, no longer
can i sleep at night
baby i need you
i need you back in my life....

ya feedback plz...juss a quick lil poem...leave a link an i'll return da favor

short, but sweet little poem, nice job, the flow was kinda like a song, it would make a nice one......peace

ay thanks for da feedback...uppin

yeah it was good i liked it

wat tha hell,that was tha dumbest shit i eva read....haha juss kiddin mayn nice poem start makin songs n tha audio mayn dedicate em 2 sombodi it was koo

ay thanks fa da feedback...n mane ion got a mic otha wise i would....peace 1

uppin...leave a link n i'll return da favor

i lookin forward to seeing another one

its was tight i really liked it

ay thanks fa da feedback...still uppin

great job....wouldn't kind bein the gurl! LOL but nice drop, sounds kinda like a song. Hell itz ur poem, ur shit, u wrote it, so do it ur way!

thanks fa da feedback...uppin