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she doesn't understand
IP: DB8D 5EE9
she doesn't understand
how much i need her back in my life i can't go just bein best friends i lover her more than that and i gotta let her know can't do it anymore can't keep my emotions inside no longer keep em bottled up gotta let em all out i need you so much i want you back in my life i love you girl, no longer can i sleep at night baby i need you i need you back in my life.... ya feedback plz...juss a quick lil poem...leave a link an i'll return da favor |
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IP: 0825 899A
short, but sweet little poem, nice job, the flow was kinda like a song, it would make a nice one......peace
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IP: 8171 A5C5
ay thanks for da feedback...uppin
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IP: 18A7 5037
yeah it was good i liked it
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
wat tha hell,that was tha dumbest shit i eva read....haha juss kiddin mayn nice poem start makin songs n tha audio mayn dedicate em 2 sombodi it was koo
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IP: 44C6 DA5F
ay thanks fa da feedback...n mane ion got a mic otha wise i would....peace 1
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IP: 66F2 AB19
uppin...leave a link n i'll return da favor
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IP: 6EE9 4719
i lookin forward to seeing another one
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New to RV
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IP: 6EE9 4719
its was tight i really liked it
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IP: 3C80 F381
ay thanks fa da feedback...still uppin
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IP: 3CB0 FA3B
great job....wouldn't kind bein the gurl! LOL but nice drop, sounds kinda like a song. Hell itz ur poem, ur shit, u wrote it, so do it ur way!
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IP: 4632 68AA
thanks fa da feedback...uppin
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