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We Breathe Rap
yo.......picture this......
people getting booed off stage because of their abnormal tissues niggas rejected off labels due to controlversal lyrical issues niggas who choked before thoudands of peeps and strived i even have people spreading hearsays saying I can't rap for life you never know how much each word hurts when it is been said cause deep inside theres a inner scar wounding all our confidence all along i know each humble rappers has got something to say whether to portray their rappers or to relieve their throbbing pain we niggas all on the quest in search of of our inner strength some wants respect, money, while some just wish to entertain that's why each & everyone of us search bone deep to our brains to release to tensions of our painful wounds and sprains.... (hook) we rappers all have talents for long-last eternity but we just waste all of it on our ego defending got the soul of a poet but we must use it properly cause we rappers all have a entity and proper ending so can you niggas feel me!? lives hard but it'd take a million stabbings in order to kill us our dangerous words is the main source to become notorious bang with us and the poet in us will make sure we track the trail that leads to your arrogance and make your life a living hell we niggas develop our skills, and now we're ready to act for real we learn from our mistake and it's our wrath you'd finally feel so why yall mocking us cause we don't look like flash cars, or beautys, or supermodels, or maybe even like a pop star cause watch out, cause we niggas are ready to start a revolution we combine together and fight back using all we learned from tuition each of us has special qualities that we have in inhabitation and when we work together, we be united like we be in fusion so get your ass up, and we fight together like we are brothers as hustlers, niggas won't touch us cause we think like gangsters don't give up, until we win the war with all our cloths tattered won't our lives then be better? (hook) we rappers all have talents for long-last eternity but we just waste all of it on our ego defending got the soul of a poet but we must use it properly cause we rappers all have a entity and proper ending .....yeah link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150510 |
yo dawg i felt that shit
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oooo shit plutonium, i felt that shit to dawg, that shit was deep.
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that was some real shit. always respect it when it comes real. i felt ya drop mate this was tight some!
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This had some real shit it . But I kind of lost focus on it.No hate.But if a peice keep's me from what's happening around me I no it's good. But while reading this I started talking to some1 in my house and lost interest.But that's just me. It may apeill to other's.
. . niggas who choked before thoudands of peeps and strived i even have people spreading hearsays saying I can't rap for life you never know how much each word hurts when it is been said cause deep inside theres a inner scar wounding all our confidence all along i know each humble rappers has got something to say . This shit is dope. It isnt rhyming all that well but who care's. These word's you wrote are real man . ......Should consider going sudio with it. That way you can get the feeling out .Showing that it isnt allway's about rhyming. ..............good drop man....pz |
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Thass hoTt.. I feel ya on dat isshh^
Juss lyke @ said i kinda got distracted by otha shit readin this, but its still good, I also think the same as what he said about using good words but not rhymin. _______________ Dayum thats DeEp______________ ...Shaii... |
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