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Old 09-20-04, 01:14 AM   #1
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yo.......picture this......

people getting booed off stage because of their abnormal tissues
niggas rejected off labels due to controlversal lyrical issues
niggas who choked before thoudands of peeps and strived
i even have people spreading hearsays saying I can't rap for life
you never know how much each word hurts when it is been said
cause deep inside theres a inner scar wounding all our confidence
all along i know each humble rappers has got something to say
whether to portray their rappers or to relieve their throbbing pain
we niggas all on the quest in search of of our inner strength
some wants respect, money, while some just wish to entertain
that's why each & everyone of us search bone deep to our brains
to release to tensions of our painful wounds and sprains....

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we rappers all have talents for long-last eternity
but we just waste all of it on our ego defending
got the soul of a poet but we must use it properly
cause we rappers all have a entity and proper ending

so can you niggas feel me!?
lives hard but it'd take a million stabbings in order to kill us
our dangerous words is the main source to become notorious
bang with us and the poet in us will make sure we track the trail
that leads to your arrogance and make your life a living hell
we niggas develop our skills, and now we're ready to act for real
we learn from our mistake and it's our wrath you'd finally feel
so why yall mocking us cause we don't look like flash cars,
or beautys, or supermodels, or maybe even like a pop star
cause watch out, cause we niggas are ready to start a revolution
we combine together and fight back using all we learned from tuition
each of us has special qualities that we have in inhabitation
and when we work together, we be united like we be in fusion
so get your ass up, and we fight together like we are brothers
as hustlers, niggas won't touch us cause we think like gangsters
don't give up, until we win the war with all our cloths tattered
won't our lives then be better?

(hook)
we rappers all have talents for long-last eternity
but we just waste all of it on our ego defending
got the soul of a poet but we must use it properly
cause we rappers all have a entity and proper ending

.....yeah






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Old 09-20-04, 01:51 AM   #2
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yo dawg i felt that shit
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Old 09-20-04, 07:09 AM   #3
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oooo shit plutonium, i felt that shit to dawg, that shit was deep.
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Old 09-20-04, 09:21 PM   #4
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Old 09-27-04, 11:13 PM   #5
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uppin again............................
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Old 09-28-04, 02:00 AM   #6
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that was some real shit. always respect it when it comes real. i felt ya drop mate this was tight some!
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Old 09-28-04, 04:24 AM   #7
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This had some real shit it . But I kind of lost focus on it.No hate.But if a peice keep's me from what's happening around me I no it's good. But while reading this I started talking to some1 in my house and lost interest.But that's just me. It may apeill to other's.
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niggas who choked before thoudands of peeps and strived
i even have people spreading hearsays saying I can't rap for life
you never know how much each word hurts when it is been said
cause deep inside theres a inner scar wounding all our confidence
all along i know each humble rappers has got something to say
. This shit is dope. It isnt rhyming all that well but who care's. These word's you wrote are real man . ......Should consider going sudio with it. That way you can get the feeling out .Showing that it isnt allway's about rhyming. ..............good drop man....pz
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Old 09-30-04, 12:26 AM   #8
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Old 09-30-04, 09:01 PM   #9
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Thass hoTt.. I feel ya on dat isshh^
Juss lyke @ said i kinda got distracted by otha shit readin this, but its still good,
I also think the same as what he said about using good words but not rhymin.

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