selah david vs CeRtIfIeDtHuG
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-01-04 at 06:22 PM

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CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 06:24 PM.

selah david has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 06:27 PM.

im spittin racial slurs hockin lugees in ya face/
dawg u jus a poet n in dis rap game u a disgrace/
see u comin out n jus tryin ta dis me/
but dawg i got news for ya im a legend goin dwn in history/

see battlein me is like a street fight/
u couldnt get ta my level even wit tha september 11th flight/
ima come out n give it all i got/
im like a bullet enterin ya chest givin ya a blood clot/

see u dunno wat ta say when my words jus spray/
so u stand thier n tell erry 1 ta hit tha D-E-C-K/
my flows jus emotional to ya comin real hard/
im beatin ya in dis battle like u a prisoner n im tha gaurd/

its time for dis ta jus b done/
i jus tor u up like a tommy gun/
well im out n its over/
u got betta luck findin a four leaf clover/
(as in he got better luck findin that then he got beatin me)

Detroit style nigga/Get buck wild nigga/ Get murked/ When u mess wit belle isle to da mile niggas/ Get soul clapped like the work out plan/ Before you flex yo muscles betta work out man//And pray Jesus walks wit u/ Cause I'm coming gunnin fo ya/ Wit these lyrical hollow points/ Let me make a point/ It's the dirty distric/This somethin u cant fuck wit/ Step up/ Get smacked down/ Nigga get wit it/ Da program I mean/ Man my flow is mean/ Yours is algiht/ But I can gurantee/ You'll never be the first draft pick/ You still little league/ I'm playin major ball/ I crush yo flow like lil cease/ Dawg you wack/ Jockin niggas flows like gurilla black/ U's a madd rapper/ Cause yo paper aint stacked/ They stacked the odds against me/And I still prevailed/My flow hold the key to heaven/ So u hrut like hell

Ay... I'm not really a rapper, I'm just a poet so it's ok if yall think it's wack...

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

man u won this in almost all categories.....
opener - thug
closer - david
flow - thug
punchez - thug
vocab - thug
structue - thug
v/ thug, david ur structure is all ova the place man no hate...

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

lol certified thug took this again KO the stucture was more set up with the flow n shit he gets my vote also he had some pretty basic punches but they atleast hit hard compaied to david lol whats name haha:laugh:

return the favour in my battle verse NET links in the sig aight peace

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

aight
no doubt that thug got this...
on the basis selahs structure was possibly the worst structured verse i've seen on here...
but thug had some okay punches n personals, finisher was kinda weak thug, but u got this hands down

return the fave in my sig
vs wish
p e a c e

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

amyn you took this no problem, nice flow, nice puncheses all out nice job mayn, im handin it to ya... you had a decent verse goin here.... and it was alot better htan selahs, nice job........

This was feedback posted for selah david
 

yo sorry but both of u need to elevate. wat are yall newbies or sumthin? yo selah ur structure and flow is poor and take off den slashes dawg dats played out, certified thug, i expected betta from u, ur flow was off as well as ur vocab. both need to elevate (no hate)

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

vote goes to certif.. flow was much betterm the other guys flow was elementary!!! nice punches=...very nice, good intro, good structure, good ending, what more can i say, certif... takes this with ease.

well done man, return the favour and vote on some of the battles below please thanks