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Check in by: 10-01-04 at 06:22 PM

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CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 06:24 PM.

selah david has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 06:27 PM.

im spittin racial slurs hockin lugees in ya face/
dawg u jus a poet n in dis rap game u a disgrace/
see u comin out n jus tryin ta dis me/
but dawg i got news for ya im a legend goin dwn in history/

see battlein me is like a street fight/
u couldnt get ta my level even wit tha september 11th flight/
ima come out n give it all i got/
im like a bullet enterin ya chest givin ya a blood clot/

see u dunno wat ta say when my words jus spray/
so u stand thier n tell erry 1 ta hit tha D-E-C-K/
my flows jus emotional to ya comin real hard/
im beatin ya in dis battle like u a prisoner n im tha gaurd/

its time for dis ta jus b done/
i jus tor u up like a tommy gun/
well im out n its over/
u got betta luck findin a four leaf clover/
(as in he got better luck findin that then he got beatin me)

Detroit style nigga/Get buck wild nigga/ Get murked/ When u mess wit belle isle to da mile niggas/ Get soul clapped like the work out plan/ Before you flex yo muscles betta work out man//And pray Jesus walks wit u/ Cause I'm coming gunnin fo ya/ Wit these lyrical hollow points/ Let me make a point/ It's the dirty distric/This somethin u cant fuck wit/ Step up/ Get smacked down/ Nigga get wit it/ Da program I mean/ Man my flow is mean/ Yours is algiht/ But I can gurantee/ You'll never be the first draft pick/ You still little league/ I'm playin major ball/ I crush yo flow like lil cease/ Dawg you wack/ Jockin niggas flows like gurilla black/ U's a madd rapper/ Cause yo paper aint stacked/ They stacked the odds against me/And I still prevailed/My flow hold the key to heaven/ So u hrut like hell

Ay... I'm not really a rapper, I'm just a poet so it's ok if yall think it's wack...

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

man u won this in almost all categories.....
opener - thug
closer - david
flow - thug
punchez - thug
vocab - thug
structue - thug
v/ thug, david ur structure is all ova the place man no hate...

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

lol certified thug took this again KO the stucture was more set up with the flow n shit he gets my vote also he had some pretty basic punches but they atleast hit hard compaied to david lol whats name haha

return the favour in my battle verse NET links in the sig aight peace

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

aight
no doubt that thug got this...
on the basis selahs structure was possibly the worst structured verse i've seen on here...
but thug had some okay punches n personals, finisher was kinda weak thug, but u got this hands down

return the fave in my sig
vs wish
p e a c e

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Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

amyn you took this no problem, nice flow, nice puncheses all out nice job mayn, im handin it to ya... you had a decent verse goin here.... and it was alot better htan selahs, nice job........

yo sorry but both of u need to elevate. wat are yall newbies or sumthin? yo selah ur structure and flow is poor and take off den slashes dawg dats played out, certified thug, i expected betta from u, ur flow was off as well as ur vocab. both need to elevate (no hate)

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