fotosynthesis vs livin-legend
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 03:33 PM

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livin-legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:34 PM.

fotosynthesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:34 PM.

fotosynthesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:35 PM.

a yo first battle im here 2 show what i can do clickclick clack and bang u wit 2 niggas know im da don ill have ya boyz put pepper and salt under ya nose to see if you respond now and days im known 4 my deadly ways my lyrical flow will turn ya braids into a high top fade pick and choose do you want da heater or da blade you might be a king but im da ace of spades. you don't really now me ya gurl tyin to blow me i wait for the perfect time 2 strike when you think i m ya homie i don't care about ya apparel fam you'll get stuffed in a caravan you dont gotta like rock music but dis shit at my waist will turn u into a heavy metal fan my flow tears through houses like heavy weather u aint have no hot freestyle since the jacksons were together rite now im not concerned about the chedder im just tryin to set it straight and see whos better. like i said it's the first battle nigga just ride out like a horse man on a saddle

livin legend aint gonna be living no longer/
ill be takeing this battle cuz im the one whos stronger/
you from new jersey im from new hampsha/
only difference between them is that the other ones more gangstah/
we all know which one is it,so give me the mike stand so i can finish killing this pussy ass bitch, my verses will make ya nerves twitch and discombobulate your brain/
then theyll take u and lock u up in the institution for the mentally insane/ sorry looks like this legend just fell of the hall of fame/ here, before they lock you up heres a picture frame/ with my signature and a message at the bottom "well battle again when you get out of the institute in autumn".

yo uppin for some more votes someone come vote....

Voted For: livin-legend

breakdown

fotosythesis

flow-5/10
punches-4/10
rhymes-6/10
structure-7/10
total-22/40

livin-legend

flow-810
punches-8/10( i was feelin tha metal fan <--sik:throwup:)
rhymes-8/10
structure-5/10(u gotta fix ya structure doggz)
total-29/0

ima hav to giv dis to livin-legend cuz he lead in most thingz good battle tho fotoynthesis

vote/livin-legend

Voted For: fotosynthesis

both verses was whack as shit...but if i had to vote i would vote foto cuz he had more organization and flow and it was e-z 2 understand....and legend all that murder killin gansta shit dont work on dis site so pick up a new style....vote fotosynthesis
both was whack tho

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uppin for some more votes.........................

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Voted For: fotosynthesis

my vote goes to fotosynthesis cus his shit was structured in bar form.........livin legend was difficult to understand........just organize it and it will be tighter.......

Voted For: livin-legend

wow yeh you got this battle cuz foto's punches are mad weak and personals lacked really bad
foto- haad okay flow srtucture was aight but at the end it was whacked work on punches and personals...

legend-aigth wow you need major work on your structure man it wasnt an easy read at all work on that..punches were herder hitting than foto you had better flow and punches which got you this win

both need to elevate tho badly...
v/livin-legend