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Check in by: 10-02-04 at 03:33 PM

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livin-legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:34 PM.

fotosynthesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:34 PM.

fotosynthesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:35 PM.

a yo first battle im here 2 show what i can do clickclick clack and bang u wit 2 niggas know im da don ill have ya boyz put pepper and salt under ya nose to see if you respond now and days im known 4 my deadly ways my lyrical flow will turn ya braids into a high top fade pick and choose do you want da heater or da blade you might be a king but im da ace of spades. you don't really now me ya gurl tyin to blow me i wait for the perfect time 2 strike when you think i m ya homie i don't care about ya apparel fam you'll get stuffed in a caravan you dont gotta like rock music but dis shit at my waist will turn u into a heavy metal fan my flow tears through houses like heavy weather u aint have no hot freestyle since the jacksons were together rite now im not concerned about the chedder im just tryin to set it straight and see whos better. like i said it's the first battle nigga just ride out like a horse man on a saddle

livin legend aint gonna be living no longer/
ill be takeing this battle cuz im the one whos stronger/
you from new jersey im from new hampsha/
only difference between them is that the other ones more gangstah/
we all know which one is it,so give me the mike stand so i can finish killing this pussy ass bitch, my verses will make ya nerves twitch and discombobulate your brain/
then theyll take u and lock u up in the institution for the mentally insane/ sorry looks like this legend just fell of the hall of fame/ here, before they lock you up heres a picture frame/ with my signature and a message at the bottom "well battle again when you get out of the institute in autumn".

yo uppin for some more votes someone come vote....

Voted For: livin-legend

breakdown

fotosythesis

flow-5/10
punches-4/10
rhymes-6/10
structure-7/10
total-22/40

livin-legend

flow-810
punches-8/10( i was feelin tha metal fan <--sik)
rhymes-8/10
structure-5/10(u gotta fix ya structure doggz)
total-29/0

ima hav to giv dis to livin-legend cuz he lead in most thingz good battle tho fotoynthesis

vote/livin-legend

Voted For: fotosynthesis

both verses was whack as shit...but if i had to vote i would vote foto cuz he had more organization and flow and it was e-z 2 understand....and legend all that murder killin gansta shit dont work on dis site so pick up a new style....vote fotosynthesis
both was whack tho

return da favor....me vs. lyrical madness
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uppin for some more votes.........................

voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: fotosynthesis

my vote goes to fotosynthesis cus his shit was structured in bar form.........livin legend was difficult to understand........just organize it and it will be tighter.......