just goffen off
 

brake bones in dislocate spines with nines
were he looks like a bottle of hine's
fuck you your unseen crew
this felix-driver missin screw's (get it felix screw driver)
i destroy your style in seconds b
you not matchin my golden abilty
go act hard kidd i never been a damn motherfuckin wuss
u could not eat me alive if my name was on ur moms puss
get the nine in u be the student in me the teacher
i shoot in fuck up your temple like a horny preacher

(preaccher fuckin kids in temple)

piss on your keyboard in have you typein in mosit codes
then leave your style more naked then playboy center folds

(n they bear assed lol)
shit i put you in your place you be the champ when we face 2 face/
leave you with a final stiff pose like the rest i my throphy case/

wow!! This is not to good at all.But you must no that seen as the title's "just goofing off". This has simple rhyme's in it, The flow isnt really there.Those explanation's in bracket's sort of fuck's thing's up while reading it. If you need to use explanation's put them at the end of your peice.Also the rhyme's are in bold .This isnt nessacerily a bad thing but if your rhyming and flowing nice you dont have to make your rhyme's stand out.We will be able to see were they are..but overall I would give this a 5/10... Keep elevating and you should be sweet...........pz

^ what he said

basically your gonna have to start from scratch if you ain't bullshittin..lengthen your lines a lil..not a whole lot..but those 2 bars you had could've been a bar if you were wordin it right