Most vs Wreckin_Ball_Kid
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DR
No B/S Votes.


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DQ'ed for going over line limit

Most has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 12:41 AM.

Wreckin_Ball_Kid has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 12:43 AM.

Most "Knows" its time to say his final "hellos"
But tries to "purpose" the fact that he's unstable like "jello"
But Real "negroes" no have "night clothes" im so "fright-full"
And its so "delight-full" your problay a "bitin-fool"
The "Suspect" has a new "subject" to "erect" The"pany effect"
So Dont "eject" of "neglect" the fact you have no "respect"
You "shipwrecked" by the "wreck" not to "expect"
"expect" the "Newsance" "confidence" or "defence"
But me "insest" is a "offence" giving ya mom "penis"
But "sence" u wanna "protest" lets handle "business"
You aint even "in-this" cant even finish a "sentance"
While you all "tense" i smell in the air the "presense"
The "presense" of the "suspence" thats got you off ya "seat"
Like an "athlete" i have ya "heartbeat" moving "con-stint-ly"
why you gotta "copy me" your textin and you still "offbeat"
Squash you to "mence meat" out like a "spreadsheet"
The same "shit" from you is "constint" but to "resist"
In this "mist" you "tripped" and got "whipped"
like MTV Dawg you just been "dissmissed"

let me break down this bitch like Maggots do to a carcass.

Drop bombs, 'wreckin' this 'kid', fake, try hard 'baller'...
Do u want this? well im loathing, blatantly ur a staller...
Its too late u lost,lacking originality this fag gets demoted...
Completely devoted to the cause,'wreckin' toys im delighted...
U flexing hard as a mouse, im spitting poisonous lyricism...
Exercise my exorcism,bad seed u sporned from retarded jism...
Im terrorism,terrorise him shoot rockets leave u ship'wrecked'..
A perfect plan carried out with expertise, u half stepped...
Half hearted emcee, half arsed, a never was, never will be...
Count the costs,an L for ya son,a good example of what couldnt be...

wrecker must not know how to count coz the battle was 10 lines! does this mean u losin kid?

uppin for votes.

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This was feedback posted for Most
 

Most: good punches, ok personals, good flow, good structure, no real multi's, good opener, ok closer, nice opener, could have been better. 5/10


Wreckin Ball Kid: didn't like how u used a few of the same words over and over again, it got kinda boring a predictable after awhile, some of ya words weren't rhyming, good structure, good flow, ok punches, ok personals, good opener, good closer, a few multi's, a few meta's. 4.5/10


vote - Most


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Voted For: Wreckin_Ball_Kid

aiight wreckin ball kid got this he had a better flow good structure was hott mayn good punches tha vocab was pretty good mayn give you ya prps had this flow determined it was like you was

most
you could do better cuzz but you wasnt comin hard enuff mayn and ya vocab was aiight so was ya structure

Voted For: Wreckin_Ball_Kid

Wreckin Ball won this battle with his onslaught of multies lol That was some serious multie madness son calm down. But overall some didnt rhyme very well n didnt make much sense. But the structure was good n the verse ws better than Most.
Most had good structure,+ for him but other than that his bars were pretty basic n not very witty so WB takes the battle
holla at ya boy
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