Judge & Jury vs Yvonne
 

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6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Check in by: 10-07-04 at 07:33 AM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 07:46 AM.

Judge & Jury has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 07:46 AM.

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #

*he posts in the abs thread..and a lil kid knows nothing about law...the jury

**he's lost 9 times..and i take that as breaking some1's ass in

***N.O =noob..he battles x-on and he no showed..

**** means i shit on him

# means i cheer him up by tellin him props..atleast he tried..


we will return the votes...honestly...

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Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”
Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”


...........if u dont get the punches then dont bother voting!!!

uppin this shit mayne!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont sleep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin peeps dont be snails!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

get uppin on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 honest votes ppl......favour will be returned!!!

and if u dont get a couple of my lines

her sig has changed now.........................but it used to have Eve and DMX on it

Voted For: Judge & Jury

Not a bad battle from either side, VOTE JUDGE AND JURY

Judge , nice punches wordplay and personals for he eve and DMX lines, they was tight.....



Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
Fuckin funny as fuckk and dope aswell

Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
Loved it the whole eve and dmx was creative

he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
the way you said newb def, should have been different.. that made your verse hella wack and didnt really connect with any of your punches...
You have ghotten better but should be challenging people on your lvel

No beef just the truth

i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #

This was terrib;e


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This was feedback posted for Judge & Jury
 

Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
no.
Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
the fuck? wack
My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”
no.
Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”
nah...

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
no..but better then the other guy
dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
nah.
he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
dont like it.
i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #
blah...


i explains the each line for both verses and in my opinion Yvonne wins
for coming less wack and less played...had stronger punches that landed
harder and just a better overall verse.

pz

^^^^ wat the fuck is this joker doin in here..................
clearly u dont know the meaning of wordplay hoe, so get the fuck outta my battle!!!!

well you dont no nothing about personals

you are wack SKANO

get he fuck out of here with thjat gayu ass feed back

SHE HAS EVE AND DMX IN HER SIG

Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
and that was funny

YOU SHOULD LEAVE THIS SITE IF THATS HOW YOU POST YO FEEDBACK

Listen children, the lines he used are weak and played and didnt
come to my interest whats so ever so basically they arent good
if your going to sit here and talk shit to be over some bullshit played
out verse that judge wrote they you might as well set it up!

pz