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iamthatdude87 10-04-04 07:40 AM

"Do We Care"....Leave Feedback.....
 
The Tears...The Cries....The Bloodshed...
Wut does this lead to?...does it get us anywhere?
Should we care about the ones that are left dead?
We are unaware that many people die in despare


But do we care?

Do we care that young teens of 18 are let out to fight
But for what?.....they have the risk of only living a short life
They cant even have a future...Knowing they can die tonight
Wut if something happens and all they're left is with a survival knife


Do we Care?

Many men and women are just here for warfare
Are they crazy or is it just there american dream?
Its not like they're gettin money and becoming a millionaire
Maybe its their self-esteem to be apart of the supreme team


But again.....Do we really care?

With bullets flying everywhere...Oh, I see as long as we're not there
As long as we're safe and not in harms way
But who cares....Just as long as we believe in gods prayer
But its okay...We see the t.v. display with soldiers dying everyday


Yes...We don't care...

Why does one fight?... When all you are is the governments puppets
They dont give a damn who you are, But just as long as they win the war
People die in the battlefield, But who cares? Might as well call them the Muppets
You may fight hardcore, But remember when you die people dont give a fuck about you any more


Thats the truth!!....They dont care!!...


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Aight this Poem is basically about how people in America dont give a fuck about anything espescially in time of war....Drop some Feedback.....and leave a link if u need feedback....

KiTTie 10-04-04 07:58 AM

yo, that was hot.. hot and true.... now return the favor:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152467

thanx n good luck. peace!

iamthatdude87 10-04-04 08:28 AM

thanks.........eyvon...

Terumoto 10-04-04 05:40 PM

^that was some good shit.. ya gettin better at this poetry thing. This one was more.. errmm... poem-like? somehow.. maybe the structure or rhyme schemes.. but yeah.. i was feelin the content.. true shit.. lotsa emotion in there..

overall a good drop.

iamthatdude87 10-04-04 07:03 PM

tahnks omb .....upping for feedback

Valor 10-04-04 09:30 PM

my little pimp in training is making me proud

*blows his nose*

iamthatdude87 10-04-04 09:36 PM

lol.....uppin for more feed back

kRuCiAl 10-04-04 09:49 PM

damn man that shit was good yo........nice drop.....and shit that is tru........if i had to rate it it be a 9/10........keep doin ya thing......

iamthatdude87 10-04-04 11:41 PM

upping for feed back....o thanks kru


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